, #81 for
played 198 times (finished 62)
"run through the jungle"
"Make sure not to blink"
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
This is a game for my Spanish class
This is impressive work for a non-native speaker of Spanish (at least, as far as I can tell with my very limited grasp of the language as well). I suppose it was also somewhat informative, with information presented in a quiz format.
However, it was also very short, lacking an interesting hook (which, I assume, is because this game is made for a school project, and not for the entertainment of us faceless internet citizens), and I'm not quite sure what the final question was.
on 3/27/2016 12:07:25 AM with a score of 0
I guess it was kind of educational, but most of this is pretty basic knowledge. It seems like it was put together quickly and overall with not much work in it. Even if it's for a school project, you should put a lot of effort into it, especially if you're going to publish it.
The beginning seems like it should have a choice of which door to go through, but you can only choose one door. There are no real choices here, it's basically just a quiz. I would have less of a problem if there was actually some kind of story involved, but clearly there is not.
If you make something like this, especially for a class, you should not publish it and instead just leave it in sneak preview mode in your profile.
on 2/10/2020 9:39:11 PM with a score of 0
Ahora me alegro de haber tomado clases de español...
En general, disfruté la historia y pensé que era bastante informativo. Buen trabajo aunque fue bastante corto. 6/8.
on 3/6/2019 10:25:13 PM with a score of 0
on 12/14/2017 8:02:38 PM with a score of 0
I don't know Spanish :D
on 7/25/2016 2:31:39 AM with a score of 0
Umm well I suppose we need a Spanish section thanks for the point!
on 6/30/2016 10:29:51 PM with a score of 0
Buena historia. El contento no tiene trama, y pienso que necesita más diversidad en términos de cuantos muchos tipos de formas usa, pero por escuela, es buena.
on 4/1/2016 11:11:08 PM with a score of 0
donde est la biblioteca
on 3/23/2016 3:36:06 AM with a score of 0
No puedo hablar en Español...
on 3/22/2016 1:12:31 AM with a score of 0
This is amazing! Just don't tell me how much time you spent on it.
-- Henry on 3/21/2016 10:11:23 PM with a score of 0
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