Cancel the Kirby cartoon!

Player Rating3.03/8

"#519 overall, #46 for 2001"
based on 216 ratings since 02/07/2006
played 1,689 times (finished 276)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length5/8

"Not going to lose any sleep"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Tags

Humor

The Kirby cartoon has been hated by a lot of people. You hate it so much that you want it cancelled. Good luck at cancelling it!Everyone

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Player Comments

There were an amount of spelling/grammar mistakes, such as "We'vce" instead of "We've." Closer proofreading would be great for this story.

It seems like this was written by a three year old. The childish humor didn't go well with the plot, and I don't know about everyone else, but I didn't find this funny.

It was insanely linear... it didn't even make sense at some points because it was so linear. Such as this:
"As you keep watching it, you hate it so much you want it cancelled."
That just doesn't make sense. This is a better way to write it:
"You continue watching it, and you really hate it. You decide you want it to be canceled."
Now that sounds better.

There were also screw ups in the logic. You don't "Sell" free things. You give away free things. That doesn't make any sense to sell free things, because sell means to make a profit.

It was also very random, and made absolutely no sense whatsoever. You can't stop a war with free donuts. If you were going for random humor, it didn't work. Not for me at least.

Then there was the suicide choice. It makes you lose on the first choice, and it just shouldn't be there, since it leads you to one sentence and makes you restart the game.

Overall, i'm gonna say 1/8. Try harder.
-- MinnieKing on 1/18/2017 7:25:14 PM
It is O.K.
-- SpaceDust on 3/16/2017 1:18:45 PM
I killed Satan and that somehow ended the Kirby cartoon. If only things were truly so simple.
-- Orange on 1/21/2017 4:09:27 PM
Best Story ever. I wish there were more endings
-- BossKat on 9/15/2016 3:28:59 PM
Love the endings
-- Crazycraft316 on 6/21/2016 9:27:41 PM
Hahaha so fun to play
-- Crazycraft316 on 6/21/2016 9:25:34 PM
It was funny and halarios
Can't wait to see how else you can win
-- Crazycraft316 on 6/21/2016 9:22:10 PM
"The cops arrive and shoot the gun, and the man luckily drops it."
Luckily the notorious gun was killed :)
-- MasonJarGuzzi on 3/3/2016 9:14:17 PM
Pretty good and funny. Keep on the good work.
-- jacksingamer on 3/1/2016 8:03:26 PM
easy!
(COOL)
-- robinsoul on 1/17/2016 10:52:53 PM
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