Cancel the Kirby cartoon!

Player Rating2.86/8

"#914 overall, #53 for 2001"
based on 280 ratings since 02/07/2006
played 2,303 times (finished 316)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Tags

Humor

The Kirby cartoon has been hated by a lot of people. You hate it so much that you want it cancelled. Good luck at cancelling it!Everyone

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Player Comments

There were an amount of spelling/grammar mistakes, such as "We'vce" instead of "We've." Closer proofreading would be great for this story.

It seems like this was written by a three year old. The childish humor didn't go well with the plot, and I don't know about everyone else, but I didn't find this funny.

It was insanely linear... it didn't even make sense at some points because it was so linear. Such as this:
"As you keep watching it, you hate it so much you want it cancelled."
That just doesn't make sense. This is a better way to write it:
"You continue watching it, and you really hate it. You decide you want it to be canceled."
Now that sounds better.

There were also screw ups in the logic. You don't "Sell" free things. You give away free things. That doesn't make any sense to sell free things, because sell means to make a profit.

It was also very random, and made absolutely no sense whatsoever. You can't stop a war with free donuts. If you were going for random humor, it didn't work. Not for me at least.

Then there was the suicide choice. It makes you lose on the first choice, and it just shouldn't be there, since it leads you to one sentence and makes you restart the game.

Overall, i'm gonna say 1/8. Try harder.
-- MinnieKing on 1/18/2017 7:25:14 PM with a score of 0
I would have thought it was much better if you could have exited it at multiple points. Roaming the various branches of short text, similar sounding kirby related revenge was a little more intensive than I wanted. What I'm saying is please let us die and stay dead!
There were some grammatical and spelling errors as well. The story, however, while silly had some potential if it had been fleshed out a little more. Nothing wrong with silly as long as it's enjoyable and this was enjoyable to an extent.
-- bilbo on 12/24/2019 10:23:06 PM with a score of 0
nitty
-- ni on 6/22/2019 6:25:33 PM with a score of 0
It is O.K.
-- SpaceDust on 3/16/2017 1:18:45 PM with a score of 0
I killed Satan and that somehow ended the Kirby cartoon. If only things were truly so simple.
-- Orange on 1/21/2017 4:09:27 PM with a score of 0
Best Story ever. I wish there were more endings
-- BossKat on 9/15/2016 3:28:59 PM with a score of 0
Love the endings
-- Crazycraft316 on 6/21/2016 9:27:41 PM with a score of 0
Hahaha so fun to play
-- Crazycraft316 on 6/21/2016 9:25:34 PM with a score of 0
It was funny and halarios
Can't wait to see how else you can win
-- Crazycraft316 on 6/21/2016 9:22:10 PM with a score of 0
"The cops arrive and shoot the gun, and the man luckily drops it."
Luckily the notorious gun was killed :)
-- MasonJarGuzzi on 3/3/2016 9:14:17 PM with a score of 0
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