De Milite Inprudenti

Player Rating5.66/8

"#112 overall, #13 for 2015"
based on 240 ratings since 04/02/2015
played 2,307 times (finished 278)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Do you know what happens to knights who dare oppose me? They’re soundly beaten, torn to shreds, reduced to mere ashes, utterly and completely obliterated. No one can defeat the great and mighty (and—dare I say—quite handsome) Knarr'ator. I’m the best, most awesomest dragon there ever is, was, and will be. And yet here you stand, just a character in my story, challenging me like the fool you are. If you think you stand a chance against me, you’ve got another think coming.

But by all means, go ahead and try.

Player Comments

The first thing I want to point out about the storygame is the use of the dragon as the narrator. That was such a unique concept, and it really helps he storygame seem much more interesting. It was a very fun read, and is most definitely the best dragon-based game on the site.

The writing itself was very good, but sometimes it did feel a little weak at some points. I think there is a mistake as well, where you go through the hall of skulls and it takes you to the page after passing the lava pit. The whole storygame is basically climax, so it's very action-packed, but it just lacks everything else that makes a good storygame. It doesn't feel complete.

It was a little short as well, and it didn't hold up to its true potential. There was only a few characters with hardly and development, and each choice is basically a guess, rather than a calculated decision. I have high hopes for that other dragon game that I see you're working on. You did a good job with the use of the advanced editor.

There was no spelling or grammar mistakes that I noticed, and the only other stake was the one I had mentioned earlier about the hall of skulls and the lava pit. An enjoyable read. 5/8
-- Nyctophilia on 11/5/2017 5:06:38 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful! Love how there is a first person narration and the player himself isn't said narrator! I'll need to steal that idea, hehe!

But seriously, great, refreshing game! It's a bit short but it's still a VERY high quality and I feel the short length helps ensure it doesn't overstay its welcome.

P.S. Love how you have the illustration of the dragon on your intro page! You'll need to tell me how you did that sometime, haha!
-- Aducan on 9/25/2015 10:07:09 AM with a score of 0
Overall, the story was fairly interesting.

I don't know how you did it, but you were able to put that cool dragon head in the description, and that certainly makes a good impression. That, and the use of the dragon as the narrator brought a refreshing spice to your story and narration (oh, the irony).

The story was relatively short along with the descriptions, but everything seemed to be well written, and I found myself laughing-especially toward the end. My only concern was that you may have a page-link error. Right after I left the hall of skulls, the page brought me to a page that said I cleared the lava-pit. I don't know if it was intentional, but you may want to fix that, even if I was still able to finish the story.

Either way, it appears as though this is one of the well-thought out stories of recent memory.

Don't you be thinkin' that I ain't never gonna not give you any sort o' score! 5/8.
-- LeoScales7 on 4/1/2015 2:26:42 PM with a score of 0
A fun story about trying to slay a dragon. This story is unique in that the dragon is also the narrator. I don't have anything more to add. Your enemy is the narrator, that's cool enough for me.
-- DerPrussen on 6/24/2019 7:57:49 PM with a score of 0
It's very good. I like how it is written, like the dragon is saying everything. Confusing him with double negatives was funny. I should make my brother play this- he drives me crazy by saying them!

The grammar was pretty good, and there were no big spelling errors, but it was confusing at times because... well... how did the dragon see me in the riddle room, exactly? How??? Other than that, it was good.

The characters were hardly developed at all. They had no real personalities, but I doubt you could have made them much better with such a short story.
-- BgirlStories on 5/7/2019 10:29:54 AM with a score of 0
This game was funny. I wish you would of made it into a longer game.
-- Faervel on 12/27/2018 1:40:14 PM with a score of 0
Dead Dragon
-- corgi213 on 3/3/2018 6:11:21 PM with a score of 0
Loved the Schrodinger’s Room!
-- daniel123 on 11/6/2017 11:17:34 AM with a score of 0
It's a cute funny story. I like how the story is told from the narrators point of view, rather than the characters' point of view.
-- nm13757 on 8/24/2017 5:21:20 PM with a score of 0
Never Not Why Not Never Not Never? Seriously? Dragon-la-fume no like double negatives? =D
-- TestingJest on 8/14/2017 3:58:58 AM with a score of 0
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