De Milite Inprudenti

Player Rating5.62/8

"#105 overall, #12 for 2015"
based on 200 ratings since 04/02/2015
played 1,749 times (finished 238)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Do you know what happens to knights who dare oppose me? They’re soundly beaten, torn to shreds, reduced to mere ashes, utterly and completely obliterated. No one can defeat the great and mighty (and—dare I say—quite handsome) Knarr'ator. I’m the best, most awesomest dragon there ever is, was, and will be. And yet here you stand, just a character in my story, challenging me like the fool you are. If you think you stand a chance against me, you’ve got another think coming.

But by all means, go ahead and try.

Player Comments

Beautiful! Love how there is a first person narration and the player himself isn't said narrator! I'll need to steal that idea, hehe!

But seriously, great, refreshing game! It's a bit short but it's still a VERY high quality and I feel the short length helps ensure it doesn't overstay its welcome.

P.S. Love how you have the illustration of the dragon on your intro page! You'll need to tell me how you did that sometime, haha!
-- Aducan on 9/25/2015 10:07:09 AM with a score of 0
Not bad, liked how the narrator was the dragon; it was a pretty unique concept. It seemed to me though that almost every other page sentenced you to death; I wish this was not so linear. Fair writing though, and it was unqiue from the average cliche "hero slays a dragon" type story.
-- FazzTheMan on 7/2/2015 3:13:36 AM with a score of 0
Overall, the story was fairly interesting.

I don't know how you did it, but you were able to put that cool dragon head in the description, and that certainly makes a good impression. That, and the use of the dragon as the narrator brought a refreshing spice to your story and narration (oh, the irony).

The story was relatively short along with the descriptions, but everything seemed to be well written, and I found myself laughing-especially toward the end. My only concern was that you may have a page-link error. Right after I left the hall of skulls, the page brought me to a page that said I cleared the lava-pit. I don't know if it was intentional, but you may want to fix that, even if I was still able to finish the story.

Either way, it appears as though this is one of the well-thought out stories of recent memory.

Don't you be thinkin' that I ain't never gonna not give you any sort o' score! 5/8.
-- LeoScales7 on 4/1/2015 2:26:42 PM with a score of 0
Interesting narrating, funny gameplay, maybe too short, but good game.
-- dorian07 on 10/31/2016 4:07:16 PM with a score of 0
I found this funny and well written compared to a great many stories on here. I liked the Dragon narrating too as it definitely made it stand out from other ones I have read recently.

Sadly, it did still fall into the 'insta-death' trap that irritates me on these games (Climbing section onward) These honestly put me off games as they remove the actual choice and become 'Guess the right answer or you loose' since there is not enough information to make an informed choice.

Overall though a really good effort and I'd like to see more.
-- FeanorOnForge on 10/21/2016 12:30:31 PM with a score of 0
Very, very good. I knew it would be great as soon as I saw the dragon on the description. It was witty and humorous, and I would definitely play it again. I can't say anything constructive.
I killed the dragon!
-- Mage on 10/16/2016 7:52:49 PM with a score of 0
Very unique and quite funny. I liked it a lot.
-- VivaEva on 10/1/2016 8:56:56 PM with a score of 0
That was great. Enjoyed it a lot.
-- Vittorio99 on 9/24/2016 4:21:45 PM with a score of 0
I gave up dragon told me to so i did :(
-- dfyf on 8/22/2016 5:00:14 AM with a score of 0
This game is so much fun! I really enjoyed the voice of the dragon narrator; he was humorous, and oddly kind towards the knight out to kill him. I played through various choices for different endings, because I wanted to read more of your writing. Great job!
-- kitkatkaity on 7/6/2016 10:01:47 AM with a score of 0
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