Don't Hurt Me Again
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played 101 times (finished 19)
"walk in the park"
"A well spent lunch break"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
This is an entry for BZ's Creatures of the Night Contest. There are two different kinds of monsters. One is a monster because of what they are, like vampires or zombies. Others are monsters because of what they do. They wear human flesh, but they are not human.
Solid story. The sudden jump to repeatedly slapping the kid, and how normalized it was for the protagonist, was interesting. It helped illuminate the madness of being a monster.
on 11/5/2018 11:16:56 PM with a score of 0
Truly wonderful. A bit shorter than I thought, but very good in that short time.
Loved all the bits making fun of the fat teacher. The protagonist sounded like an absolute shit.
One more thing, I loved the_
on 11/4/2018 11:03:49 PM with a score of 0
Loved the imagery.
on 11/3/2018 12:00:08 PM with a score of 0
Still love your writing. :)
on 10/31/2018 8:52:32 PM with a score of 0
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