Hell Girl: The Shattered Mirror
, #11 for
played 6,327 times (finished 560)
"no possible way to lose"
"A well spent lunch break"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
Geared for Extremists
A short piece of fanfic, based on the Hell Girl anime.
I have not seen the anime but this sort of story is timeless, it has been told all over the world in different forms. This was an excellent version with perfect writing, good use of pictures and probably the most effective use of the item option I've seen in a story game. I don't like fan fics a great deal as they are based on plagiarising to a lesser or greater extent but with a classical story like this it is not so much the idea as the execution that counts and this flowed together perfectly in story-game form, if a touch too linear in one or two places (info from 3 or 4 pages could probably have been condensed into 1 without any effect on the story-game overall)
on 1/14/2015 1:33:36 AM with a score of 0
Bravo. One big Morton's Fork of a game. You can't win, really, because either way you're either condemned to hell, a murderer, a suicide, or torture victim, but hey...it was quite well written. And you can at least get the grim satisfaction of killing that bitch.
on 8/26/2012 3:02:54 PM with a score of 0
I really, really liked this. I'm going to replay it to check out the other paths. It was simple but had a good flow to it, and it was pristine as far as mechanics, grammar, and spelling are concered. I gave an 8!
on 5/18/2011 9:55:00 AM with a score of 0
I feel distuurbed xD
-- Johndoe on 10/22/2017 9:55:10 AM with a score of 0
WOWOWOWOWOW i played this in class 10/10 xD
on 10/17/2017 11:13:44 AM with a score of 0
I love it,it says exactly what I want to do to myself.
on 10/12/2017 3:14:29 PM with a score of 0
Super. Hated that sister though - would have enjoyed a little more vengeance.
on 3/22/2017 6:49:57 PM with a score of 0
tossed away the doll, got the she went to hell ending anyway :/
-- this guy on 1/18/2017 7:25:23 AM with a score of 0
There wasn't many choices, but otherwise it was fine.
on 1/14/2017 12:32:01 PM with a score of 0
I thoroughly enjoyed pushing her in front of a car.
I've never heard of Hell Girl, but this was a pretty great storygame in terms of offering meaningful choices and writing. Going to explore some of the other paths. 7/8
on 12/31/2016 4:00:24 AM with a score of 0
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