Is Dave Chappelle crazy?
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Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
Dave Chappelle! He's the #1 Black comedian in the world! He's got a hit show on Comedy Central! But has the fame and money caused Dave Chappelle to lose his mind? Go back to the days leading up to Chappelle leaving for Africa. Keep him from going insane by avoiding network executives, rabid Chappelle Show fans, and others that might cause his stress level to rise. Get him out of the Comedy Central building and to the airport without his INSANITY Points getting to 100. Hint: there are also items and people that will help remove some Insanity Points from Chappelle. GOOD LUCK, BITCHES!
This was alright. I didn't hate it, but I didn't really like it either. It was overall just boring and there wasn't really any substance to it.
The very first thing that I noticed was the text. You constantly changed text color which is distracting and sometimes takes away readability. I don't care enough to see if there's a meaning behind it, but just so you know, people don't usually like that.
I think you were trying to capture Chappelle's style in this, and if you were, you did an ok job. It does ok at humor, though I personally don't like much of Chappelle's stand-up, so that might be why I didn't really enjoy the humor.
This is much less of a story and much more of a game, which is something that I don't really like. This is chooseyourSTORY after all, and there's really no story to this. The writing is meh and has several errors throughout. It just feels like it was thrown together in a day and doesn't seem to have much effort.
One last thing I'll note is that stories in this format typically work better in second person. The third person you used is ok, but usually the goal of CYS stories is to put the reader in the mind of the protagonist, not just outside.
on 12/18/2019 5:31:49 PM with a score of 0
So check bad?
on 1/24/2018 5:29:07 PM with a score of 0
A funny short CYOA without neglecting work, chores, or children.
on 12/13/2017 4:30:39 PM with a score of 0
Funny story. I wish it was longer though and some of the text was hard to read.
on 6/11/2017 2:48:24 PM with a score of 0
That was funny, though too short :)
on 6/25/2016 12:15:04 PM with a score of 0
Hey, I managed to make Dave insane. Hurray
on 5/16/2016 9:25:24 AM with a score of 0
Yeah... Like Kiel, I tried to lose but still ended up winning. 2/8
on 5/23/2015 8:36:43 AM with a score of 0
-- derpybacon on 5/16/2015 8:40:19 PM with a score of 0
Great game. Funny at some parts. I think the length could be longer, but it's decent nonetheless. Very creative and thought out. I like it.
on 4/4/2015 5:30:54 PM with a score of 0
on 3/23/2015 5:11:18 PM with a score of 0
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