Rainy mood

Player Rating3.22/8

"#496 overall, #56 for 2015"
based on 117 ratings since 01/15/2015
played 1,383 times (finished 131)

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Well, this is my first story game. English isn't my native language so I apologize if there are huge mistakes. 

It's about a love that can't be. It contains some bad words so if you have a problem with it, don't play. I actually didn't kow which Maturity Level to took, so no hate please. 

If you ever wonder, there's no good ending so don't play a dozen of times to find it. 

Due to that, there's not really a way to "lose" this game. 




Player Comments

I liked it, but it was very sad ;-;

I could feel emotion for these characters, because of the backstory and the character development. Despite this being very short, it was a good storygame because you had enough detail to keep me entertained.

There were multiple grammar and spelling mistakes, such as:
"And this were her last words."
I think you meant, "and these were her last words."

You should have made it longer, because what little you wrote, I enjoyed. I think this storygame is kind of underrated honestly, but I guess the not so good rating is because of the length and stuff :P

Also, on the first page, I have no idea what i'm choosing, so it's a guess the correct choice or lose thing.

-- MinnieKing on 3/21/2017 9:23:20 PM
This was very short and had little explanation, however I made sure to check for every single page to get each little bit of information.

The premise was interesting enough I that I really wanted to know more, even while I fully understand that it would probably be a let down if I actually knew more of the story.

I never rate games this short highly but yours has gotten the highest rating for a story of this length I have given as the writing, the style and the incompleteness all worked for it.

Next time, if you can, please write a much longer story game as I would love to read more of your work.
-- FeanorOnForge on 1/16/2015 12:36:59 PM
This is interesting but too short, it's a promising lead in to what could be a larger story, after this sort of prologue you could move onto "Three years ago... Chapter One". I'm a English teacher so I'm bias into giving you extra points just because I know how hard it can be to write in a second language and you do it very well. The story is on the sad side and seems rather personal, a happy ending is not compulsory of course but even a half-imagined rays of hope might offset the bleakness a little? :) 6/8
-- Will11 on 1/15/2015 7:55:26 PM
Since all this is based on something that hapened three years ago, I feel that maybe you should explain what happened three years ago? The stuff that you had was good, really. But I just ended feeling a little bit... confused.
-- PhantomStylus on 6/14/2017 4:03:53 PM
wow. that's depressing. seriously?????? he couldn't leave her alone? creepy stalker of a guy.
-- auna on 6/8/2017 4:27:02 PM
Very touching. I would have wished if there were more options and the game was longer, but otherwise it was nice.
-- them love/drama on 6/7/2017 8:58:19 PM
Interesting. You did an okay job of capturing emotion. Wished there were more of a backstory and some character development, which would have made this much more engaging. You're writing is pretty decent as well. Short, but I was intrigued.
-- crazygurl on 6/6/2017 11:36:40 PM
Christ. This was heavy with emotions and I was really drawn into it by the end of the longest route. I think it would be nice if you could actually change things between you, because every single route was literally pain. Which I didn't mind so much, but...they're all bad endings, effectively, just in varying degrees of internal suffering.

Some more background information would be nice but I get what kind of atmosphere you were striving for and the overall effect was one which gripped me to the end.
-- Saika on 4/26/2017 5:22:32 PM
-- Sam2 on 3/9/2017 5:04:10 AM
Lack of details.
-- dorian07 on 10/25/2016 10:13:47 AM
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