Rainy mood

Player Rating3.24/8

"#735 overall, #95 for 2015"
based on 134 ratings since 01/15/2015
played 1,599 times (finished 152)

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Well, this is my first story game. English isn't my native language so I apologize if there are huge mistakes. 

It's about a love that can't be. It contains some bad words so if you have a problem with it, don't play. I actually didn't kow which Maturity Level to took, so no hate please. 

If you ever wonder, there's no good ending so don't play a dozen of times to find it. 

Due to that, there's not really a way to "lose" this game. 

 

 

 

Player Comments

I liked it, but it was very sad ;-;

I could feel emotion for these characters, because of the backstory and the character development. Despite this being very short, it was a good storygame because you had enough detail to keep me entertained.

There were multiple grammar and spelling mistakes, such as:
"And this were her last words."
I think you meant, "and these were her last words."

You should have made it longer, because what little you wrote, I enjoyed. I think this storygame is kind of underrated honestly, but I guess the not so good rating is because of the length and stuff :P

Also, on the first page, I have no idea what i'm choosing, so it's a guess the correct choice or lose thing.

4/8.
-- MinnieKing on 3/21/2017 9:23:20 PM with a score of 0
This was very short and had little explanation, however I made sure to check for every single page to get each little bit of information.

The premise was interesting enough I that I really wanted to know more, even while I fully understand that it would probably be a let down if I actually knew more of the story.

I never rate games this short highly but yours has gotten the highest rating for a story of this length I have given as the writing, the style and the incompleteness all worked for it.

Next time, if you can, please write a much longer story game as I would love to read more of your work.
-- FeanorOnForge on 1/16/2015 12:36:59 PM with a score of 0
This is interesting but too short, it's a promising lead in to what could be a larger story, after this sort of prologue you could move onto "Three years ago... Chapter One". I'm a English teacher so I'm bias into giving you extra points just because I know how hard it can be to write in a second language and you do it very well. The story is on the sad side and seems rather personal, a happy ending is not compulsory of course but even a half-imagined rays of hope might offset the bleakness a little? :) 6/8
-- Will11 on 1/15/2015 7:55:26 PM with a score of 0
For how short it was, the mood building and development was excellent. Of course I'd like to see this longer and more in depth, but it's pretty good as it is.

The characters are believable and you can really put yourself in the protagonist's shoes. The dialogue makes you want to know more about what happened and what led up to it. I loved the short pages that conveyed so much emotion with so few words.

One of the things I didn't like was, of course, the spelling. I noticed you said English isn't your first language so I'll cut you some slack.

Overall, I like it a lot. It could do good to make it longer, but I like it in its current state. I'd leave a better rating, but with the spelling issues and the shortness of the story, I can't. Good job though.

4/8
-- Megumeme on 1/1/2020 10:43:36 PM with a score of 0
So, this was a good piece, with good writing and story.
Some nice little improvements are considering the swears. It's not so nice to contain those words in a romantic story, and I would suggest censoring them.
Another thing that I want to mention is it was very sad. I cannot find a possible way to win her heart, so it's a bit hard for the reader.
The story was short, but considering I chose the shortest ones on purpose, it wasn't anyone's mistake. Some readers who like short stories (like me) would really appreciate this one.
Overall this was good and for a little phrase to describe this story...
Good work :)
-- StoryTurtle on 4/26/2019 6:14:54 AM with a score of 0
The ending was getting somewhere, but it should have gone further. I would have liked for something hard and long.
-- Nick Gurr on 4/23/2019 3:09:33 PM with a score of 0
Since all this is based on something that hapened three years ago, I feel that maybe you should explain what happened three years ago? The stuff that you had was good, really. But I just ended feeling a little bit... confused.
-- PhantomStylus on 6/14/2017 4:03:53 PM with a score of 0
wow. that's depressing. seriously?????? he couldn't leave her alone? creepy stalker of a guy.
-- auna on 6/8/2017 4:27:02 PM with a score of 0
Very touching. I would have wished if there were more options and the game was longer, but otherwise it was nice.
-- them love/drama on 6/7/2017 8:58:19 PM with a score of 0
Interesting. You did an okay job of capturing emotion. Wished there were more of a backstory and some character development, which would have made this much more engaging. You're writing is pretty decent as well. Short, but I was intrigued.
-- crazygurl on 6/6/2017 11:36:40 PM with a score of 0
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