Silent Night

Player Rating4.80/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 13 ratings since 12/24/2018
played 87 times (finished 16)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

A very questionable Christmas special.

It's Christmas in Hub City. One might expect that even criminals would take the night off, but you've learned the hard way that crime doesn't sleep. While the rest of the city is tucked into their homes in the company of loved ones, you're on the hunt in a silent city, making sure that things stay that way.

The Question is copyright DC comics. So yeah, don't sue me.

Author's Notes: Did I say I was definitely not going to write a Question fanfiction for this contest? Because what I meant was I didn't mean to but I had to squeeze something out before the contest's end. And with Christmas so fast approaching, what better than a Christmas special, eh?

Player Comments

Despite being short and quite linear it was still enjoyable because the scenes were descriptive enough and your style, as usual, was very similar to that of an actual comic. As Jodie said, the fact that the right choices weren't always obvious also gave a nice touch to the story.
-- undr on 12/26/2018 4:14:24 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed this.

It was short and sweet, well written, but it felt very linear. I would have liked to have seen choices that didn't strong arm me. There were multiple endings(different results for the fight and some bad ends), but the choices felt a little empty because they all lead to the same fight no matter what.

Besides that, it was descriptive and engaging. I had fun reading it and wish there was more of it to read.

Great job!

I give it a 4/8, would have been a 5 if it wasn't so linear.
-- simplesabley on 12/26/2018 10:54:47 AM with a score of 0
Pretty cool story
-- Faervel on 12/25/2018 7:08:08 PM with a score of 0
I thought the moral choices were pretty thought-provoking (well, as thought-provoking as two opposing sentences can be) and gray, different people would have different answers to those dilemmas.

I also like how you can tell which option is going to get you killed beforehand if you're really trying to avoid dying. No tricks or anything. For example, when someone throws a punch at you it sounds pretty implausible to just grab their swinging fist and break it. However it's not overly obvious so you can still die if you're not thinking that hard about it.

My favorite part (I'm pretty sure I played through every page unless there were hidden variables) was when the Question rushes in at the eight men and then gets pushed/kicked into the water and starts drowning. Obviously it gives you the "Dead" ending, but I thought it was realistic that there's an option to just give in and die, anyone might have a little part of them thinking that if they get beat up and shot and pushed into cold water. I liked "It doesn't hurt." It kind of made the scene better than if it had been "You sink into the freezing water, your whole body hurts, you want it to end, it really hurts, finally death brings you sweet relief", that was probably what I would expect to happen. I guess maybe you put that because he was numb from the cold. But still, I thought it was good and a little unexpected.
-- jodithewitch on 12/25/2018 1:49:24 AM with a score of 0
Hey, Chris wrote another storygame. Since he said it won't be a question fanfiction, I wonder what it is?
Oh... It's a Question fanfiction.

Anyway, it was a short story and all, but it did have a nice amount of FEELS for the length. Plus, it's sorta CHRIStmas themed, so that's fitting.
-- WouldntItBeNice on 12/25/2018 1:05:36 AM with a score of 0
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