Player Rating5.07/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 63 ratings since 08/07/2016
played 436 times (finished 42)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a SnickersĀ®"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

This is part of the School Based storygame contest.

This is Lawrence's final few days at Hawthorn School. Things become... memorable.

Thank you iavatus for being my beta-reader and At_Your_Throat for the cover art.

I fixed the scripting error. You can now receive 1,000 points by finding the ending shown to those who have the normally maximum score of 400. I also added your total score at the end of the game so that you don't have to post in order to see it.


Player Comments

A well written story about school. This one felt more 'school' to me than any other in the contest. The characters felt real and believable and the setting seemed very tangible. Good entry. My only nitpick is that many of the choices didn't really have consequences and so it felt less like interactive fiction and more like just fiction.
-- donteatpoop on 7/7/2016 1:35:24 PM with a score of 220
This game was simply AWESOME.
-- Snowflame on 4/7/2017 10:13:54 PM with a score of 400
This book is one of the best I've read so far!!! I still do not understand what Mag is, or who the wife is, but I know one thing for sure; THIS IS THE BOOK OF THE CENTURY! Best wishes!
-- jamma192 on 2/19/2017 1:19:39 PM with a score of 1400
Pleasant and interesting. A few grammar problems throughout. The ending I got left me with lots of questions. ???
-- Quorrah on 12/24/2016 3:21:20 PM with a score of 310
I liked this.
-- Mage on 12/14/2016 8:01:19 AM with a score of 400
Extremely well written!
-- neeoandblack on 8/28/2016 4:06:01 PM with a score of 1400
Checking score
-- Maria II on 7/9/2016 11:49:44 PM with a score of 360
Wow, I really enjoyed this game. Curious to see what my score is lol
-- WishfulThinking on 7/8/2016 2:41:19 PM with a score of 340
This was enjoyable.
-- Bucky on 7/7/2016 12:30:00 PM with a score of 340
Okay, I found a scripting error. It causes your max score to be 400, but I'll edit this once the contest is over.
Here's a link to a walkthrough if you want it:
-- WouldntItBeNice on 7/6/2016 10:25:46 PM with a score of 400
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