Survivors

Player Rating4.96/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 53 ratings since 02/15/2017
played 202 times (finished 7)

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a SnickersĀ®"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

This is a short story that is was an entry for playa988's 4-week long contest. Yes, I wish it was longer, too, but this was intentionally short for the purposes of writing a complete story in the short time frame allowed for the contest. There are, however, 18 endings, so feel free to try the story more than once and follow different paths. The theme of the contest was "gray vs gray," so don't look for a "winning" ending. When it's all grey, no one wins.

The year is 2016 and a series of nuclear bombs have been detonated in dozens of cities across the United States in the population centers. The country is destroyed and many people are dead.

While many cities (and surrounding areas) have been destroyed, there are various areas, far from the population centers, where people have survived. The people are trying to make sense of what happened and are trying to rebuild their lives and their country.

This story takes place in Western Montana where you follow the adventures of Jim Thompson, a survivor of the massive attack, trying to make sense of what is left of the world. Your choices will decide what happens to Jim, and perhaps what happens to the country...

 

Player Comments

Overall, the story was really good. A lot of the choices had me sitting back and really weighing down my options. Jim's morality places a huge role here, and it sucks having to think about the well being of others when you are dealing with starvation, a lack of supplies, and a sense of danger yourself. I've played through about 4-5 endings, and while each of them didn't really have a "happy ending", I was pretty satisfied with all of them.
-- AppDude27 on 9/10/2015 2:50:33 PM with a score of 0
Huh, interesting. Your writing was pretty descriptive, though a little jolting at times -- you should consider using some more conjunctions in your writing -- and there were several grammar mistakes, but they didn't really detach from the experience. All in all this was a unique, quite replayable story and a nice addition to the contest. Also, what you did with the background and format certainly helped.
-- FazzTheMan on 8/18/2015 8:23:33 AM with a score of 0
Fantastic Work. I'll list the main reasons why I liked this:

1) The layout looked great giving it a real book feeling.
2) The writing was error-free, concise and very descriptive. The benefits and consequences of the choices made sense.
3) The sheer variety of endings makes this a very re-readable story, playing through it a few times I've read about half the endings so far but I'll definitely come back to this to read the others later.

You mentioned the length limits and it's true there are only six or seven choices in a complete story but if you're going to have a story with eighteen different endings that's a lot of branches and a lot of pages. I think this is a story that could be developed further quite easily by branching again and again, I'm giving this 7/8 because I think it could potentially be improved by more branches and endings but this is a small issue, even if this only had eight endings this would still be excellent because of the writing quality.

If Playa988's competition is still going this story is so good as to be practically certain of a place in the top 3 with a very good shot at number 1 :D Definitely one of the most impressive stories of the year so far.
-- Will11 on 8/13/2015 11:37:43 PM with a score of 0
I loved it
-- Stormfeather on 11/15/2016 7:25:25 PM with a score of 0
Nice. Wish it was longer
-- Tyrant44 on 7/26/2016 7:37:27 AM with a score of 0
Great job ogre! This storygame made me feel good about the character, even if I didn't get a "happy ending". I felt like the game was one of the rare cases where it is actually a STORY and a GAME. Again, great job.
-- Jimmysutton on 3/31/2016 12:01:56 PM with a score of 0
Tried to defend the towns food. I liked this story a lot and I wish there was more to it or a part two. It is very well written.
-- corgi213 on 8/18/2015 8:14:53 AM with a score of 0
I loved this! It has a really cool story and is planned out quite well. I rated a 7/8! You did a good job and I hope to play more of your games later on.
-- Warriorstar on 8/16/2015 2:54:27 PM with a score of 0
I liked it.

There were a few grammar mistakes but they didn't take away from anything, otherwise it is well written and entertaining.
-- DeathIncarnate on 8/13/2015 1:08:33 PM with a score of 0
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