, #9 for
played 630 times (finished 54)
"no possible way to lose"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.
You harvest in the Arena. Every machine needs a function, and that is yours. Written for the
Tiny 'Topia challenge
When it comes to mizal's writing, I'm always surprised by how many different genres she has a grasp on. This one in particular is no different, I would say. The quality that
s present in this story, remains consistent all throughout every page that is present in this story-game.
I feel as through the use of a different sort of font, than what some would consider the standard, and the tone and dialogue choices, certainly makes one feel as if they're a machine. Such a thing gives this story a bit of a unique flair and feel to quite a fair amount of stories that are on this site.
Although this is a short, it also done well. A story-game being done well is something that I personally feel to be of the up most importance when all is said and done.
it does just that.
on 2/8/2021 6:16:31 PM with a score of 0
Wow! I love this game! So epic although I wish it was a bajillion pages longer, I just love Mizal's stories so much!!!
on 1/13/2021 6:15:15 PM with a score of 0
on 1/6/2021 4:42:51 PM with a score of 0
I really like how the writing slowly reveals the world of this story and fleshes out the POV character! And who doesn't love post-apocalyptic robots?
on 12/22/2020 7:26:50 PM with a score of 0
I'm into it.
on 12/15/2020 6:40:09 PM with a score of 0
I wish it was longer.
on 12/5/2020 10:52:17 AM with a score of 0
Quite a good story considering it's length(tiny-topia). Substantial information, and great robotics!
on 11/16/2020 11:27:39 AM with a score of 0
Good start. Hopefully it gets longer.
on 10/18/2020 9:54:18 PM with a score of 0
Short but well written, I liked how the characters acted and the world was built.
on 7/29/2020 3:55:33 AM with a score of 0
This was really fun to read and pretty cool. I liked having to go through multiple options to get the lore and background story instead of having it dumped onto a single page or something.
Got the rebellion ending first which was cool. Although Im sure like many branches that ended terribly for our robot protagonist.
Really cool, bruh
on 7/16/2020 3:13:13 PM with a score of 0
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