A simple story where the main character feels out of place. It is more of a story than a game with few choices. This is my first story, so please don't be too harsh. Thanks! :)

A story told only through haikus and your decisions. I personally enjoy stories that make you think and let you decipher the words however you want. I did my best to incorporate that into this story made if poems. Enjoy!

Claire Handle has just moved out of her parent's house, and into a college dorm. Going to class, studying, and enduring the pains of cafeteria food are all daily chores. It's all normal until she gets a new roommate, and her parents stop answering their phone calls. This story only has three choices, and they're at the very end. There are some metaphors that I have included in here, too. Unless you have enough time for reading this, I suggest that you don't read it at all. I'd like some positive feedback on my story.

In my opinion, you should publish the first part of it saying that it is a test, then see what the comments say and take suggestions from that. I'll be happy to read it :)

Thanks guys! And Xt1000305, thanks for your feedback on my game!

Oops, sorry. I'll be sure to put something like this there next time.

Could somebody check out my new story game and give it an honest rating? I just republished it and want to know how it is. It's my first one, so don't be too harsh. It's a science fiction story.

That was an interesting game, lol.

Hey Jenna! If you have any questions, ask me. Otherwise, good luck with "Half Blood Camp". :)