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Take the role of Gale Arkanis, a young Abnormal in training, but one who proves promising. A grand upheveal is about to take place in the world and Gale will need all the abilities he can.
Gain and choose between three differning paths of the Abnormal way, abilities that allow you to have abnormal control your body, your mind and the world around you.
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This is only a preview, please to all that finish this preview, contact me either through messaging or rating. tell me what you thought about the story and wether or not I sould continue with this idea. Tell me anything and everything, the more the better... the good and the bad.
Mind you this is a rough draft and it is very rough
Follow in the footsteps of an epic journey. The two nations of Dagon and Evoi are entertwined in an ever increasing hatred of each other. Long ago on the outskirts of Evoi, in the forrest of Rasengon, a terrible plague struck. Many of the forrests inhabitants died, and only those of certain genetics survived. Those that died, died because the plague is known to transform all that come into contact with it over time. Those unable to survive the transformation die, and those that are able to survive would forever become terrifingly agressive and fearless mutations. To date no humans have survived the effects of the plauge.
When Evoi declared that Dagon used biological weapons against them, a war broke out on the grandest scale. Only the plague stopped the fighting. The plague not only transformed the creatures, but genetically transformed the forrest itself, As this mutated forrest reproduced it carried with it the plague, and the forrest itself reproduced at an alarming rate. The forrest grew to an immense size, devouring the land, turning both countries once prosperous, into forrests filled to the brim with deadly mutations.
The forrest has slowed down it's growth recently to a near stop. Now both countries face great strife toward each other. War seems to be on the horizon, both blame the other for the plague and neither will come foward. Now events are unfolding that will change the face of the world forver; will it be salvation, or complete destruction?
Dave Jackonson of age 30 had won what most people never would, The Mega Mighty Millions Lottery. With the money he was able to fullfil a lifelong dream of owning his own private airplane. To make things even better, he had found the perfect new home. A multi million dollar manor in a secluded island 100 miles off the coast of the pacific. Things seemed to be only too good for the now retiring bus boy.
But as fate would have it, the greatest of luck would be followed by the gravest of misfortune.
Its just another peaceful day in your small village a few miles from the nearest port town when the unthinkable happens. A group of vicious Reptileons "lizzard people" invades wielding human made weapons. Reptileons were never known to use weapons other then their own body and hadn't attacked mankind ever in recorded history up into this point. All questions aside, you must survive.
Number #188 awakens in a small room. It feels like its the very first time he has have ever been awake. As far as he knows it really was the first time.
When he awakes, it is with all the intellect of any adult, perhaps he was once a great problem solver. But #188 also awakens without a single memory of who he is, or his past. Trapped inside a place known only as the "Facility", #188 is one of many other numbered residents. The many residents are forced to work different jobs in the mines for some unknown higher purpose. The many residents seem to be like robots. Emotionless, unaware of anything but what they are told to do by the central system. #188 is different though, unlike the others he seems to have a soul and yearns to figure out what is going on, and escape the hellish servitude of the facility.
Can you lead #188 through the facility and answer the many questions he has before it's to late?
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As the story progresses, the text will change color and style depending on whats there.
Whenever any character is speaking it will be in that characters own unique color. Outside of characters speaking, everything else will be emboldened in black. The main character always speaks in the color "red".
You are known by some as Gale Rine, to others the Prince of Storm. You arrived recently on the outskirts of a town, to only discover it to had been infected by a terrible disease, those affected by it cannot control their savage impulses, You've seen this disease before, it spreads slowly at first, but given enough time it can effect an entire town, causing untold havoc.
Will you save those within, or destroy it completely before its to late, the choice is up to you.
You are one of the few martians left on mars after the great leaving, an event where all but the lowest class martians left the planet in search of a new home after they ruined mars with massive none stop, planet wide partying. Over a hundred years has passed since then and you are of the newest generation of true martians born long after the great leaving.
Since then only recently in the past decade have those who call themselves the United Counsel of Earth been discovered, a few of the martians had made a pact with those earthlings, choosing to help with technology and understanding, so that humans could travel adequately to mars and martians could travel to earth, albiet very secretly at first. Now the few true martians left are known amoung a fair portion of the earthlings in power "Those that travel the space between planets" Since then humans have recently being colonizing the planet, and for a rambunctious young martian amoung these odd humans, adventure and fun awaits.
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Points lost and won in duels on 3/9/2008 2:50:45 PMI won 248 points in duels. So I have a netloss of 13 points, giver or take a small margin of error. All my others are draws.
What I noticed, not that anyone cares, is that early on when I was betting 5 and 10 points, I actually had a huge increase in points won over points lost. But eventually I started to bet 1s 3s and 5s. The other half of my bets, the second later half, all of my bets are smaller. I noticed that the only bets I won were mostly 1s 2s and 3s and most of my losses were 5s. So where as I gained huge points early on, I eventually slower dwindled it and now am at a negative gain in points.
Points lost and won in duels on 3/9/2008 2:35:17 PM
261 experience lost in duels. Doesn't include draws or wins.
I tryed using a calculater, but it said syntax error, so I just the simple math without it, it was easier.
I know it doesn't tell you the points you lose or gain total. But I decided to do the math, and give or take a small margin of error, i've lost 261 experience points dueling. Now I haven't calculated how many points i've won. But once I do, I'll add them together and see the result.
I wouldn't mind having the site tell you this, but then maybe people wouldn't duel as much if they knew just what they were losing or winning. I don't know.
Very Good Statistic on 11/12/2007 3:19:51 PM
Question for Snow fans on 9/8/2007 4:58:44 PM
The Facility, hopefully my first, real published on 9/8/2007 4:44:30 PM
Halfway decent game.
http://www.chooseyourstory.com/story/The_Facility.aspx
Here is a sneak peak at the game i've.... errr started almost a year ago or something. Since I kind of left the site for awhile "With school and all". But now that I'm back I'm trying to work on my game. Although I'm still very busy, actually more then before, I'll try to be on sometimes.
Nearly every day of the week now. With college and work. I'm really starting to miss when I was a kid. Ages 2-16. to be exact. God do I..... dislike life more then ever......................
I really, really miss being a kid. To much responsibilties, to much work..... no more friends. no more fun...... more and more .....bad memories keep pileing on each other. As... more people lie to you and hurt you more and more. And you find people you thought you trusted, hurting you..... and so on. I feel like I'm becoming my pessimistic parents and family. Having more negative knowledge and learning experiences that I keep learning, I wish I would stop learning them. I'm always suprised, cuz it seems infinate "Maybe a bit over exagerated), the ...... learning you go through in life.............
I thought college is supose to be the best years of your life.. I mean I love college, but in general, life kind of ... well isn't what I would call the best years of my life.
I also hear from some people that, life gets better when you get older. From said person who had just got happily married at a ripe old age. Hehehe.
You have probably heard that people get more mature as they age, and are friendlier, and smarter about .... how they treat eachother or something. Very true.
The only good thing is learning in college, and .... well thats it for me right now....
And I have made a few friends in college, but......................
I'm just really frustrated with my life.... I mean really frustrated. You would think I would be used to this by now, but it's only getting harder on me.
I kind of think I was happiest as a child. I don't think I will ever be as happy as I was again. I had a really nice childhood. God life was great.
please tell me this site is not closing on 6/21/2007 4:10:39 PM
Advertising for the Site on 6/20/2007 3:57:50 PM
Don't mind me asking, but... why does Alexp have to worry about worsethenfailure.com ?
Whats his deal there?
Would you be afraid? Opinions on this appreciated. on 6/15/2007 8:26:33 PM
I'm guessing if the cops didn't get them that who ever robbed that person must be in hidding by now... not sure, since I"m inside now. LOL
Would you be afraid? Opinions on this appreciated. on 6/15/2007 8:25:03 PM
My dad tells me that all the time crimes are in the newspaper on this street. Not the street my dad lives on, but this big long main street. My dads street is a side street of it. Actually not much trouble happens on my dads street. Were lucky. But as my dad says, it's been getting worse and in the next few years it could be very bad. But thats why the cops are cracking down now.........
But a street away a few, rather bad crimes happened. I'd rather not tell you about them. But if you want to know, ask and I will PM you it. Quiet a few.....
Would you be afraid? Opinions on this appreciated. on 6/15/2007 8:22:38 PM
Ohh I wasn't hanging out with a wanted person. Plus my dads house was like.... 150 feet from where I was.
Same with all the other kids parents....
And it was my dad that told me that it was someone that got beat up for a cell phone. He came in awhile ago while I was typing, and told me cops were on our street again.