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Recent PostsHello and a question on 9/30/2022 12:47:51 AM
God damn it! You made me lose a 5 point duel. I had 2:1 odds until you transferred him those points. Sure, I already lost a duel to him with those odds, but I was guaranteed to win the second time!
invovations in gay little cars on 9/28/2022 12:15:43 AM
This isn’t a typical case of supply and demand. Like others have said, it’s an example of economies of scale and technological innovation reducing prices, which usually isn’t accounted for when you learn about supply and demand in Econ 101.
EndMaster's Prompt Contest completed entries on 9/5/2022 10:03:43 PM
I can’t speak for others, but your title is the most interesting-sounding one to me simply because it gives a great idea of the story’s tone if nothing else.
Government poll on 9/4/2022 10:31:30 PM
Sounds like you just want to be emperor with extra steps.
EndMaster's Prompt Contest completed entries on 9/4/2022 10:17:42 PM
I think people are more impressed that you have the most ratings rather than the most comments. It reflects that the story has a very eye-catching title (@Gryphon ‘s opinion notwithstanding).
One Paragraph Story (looking for feedback) on 9/4/2022 10:02:11 PM
It doesn’t seem like he would necessarily need any scripting for this. If he includes 5 different choices, he would only need to manually write 3,125 one-paragraph stories, which seems entirely doable.
Needing some opinions on 9/3/2022 11:05:39 PM
I liked it as a first page. There are some extra commas and some missing ones from place to place, so you might want to run the text through a grammar-checking program.
Greetings comrades on 9/3/2022 10:46:45 PM
I’m glad you aren’t able to use emojis.
Here's a story about a war on 8/30/2022 5:24:07 PM
Even if every ship had a crew of 10,000 men, Lavassia's casualties in the Battle of Mirbodia would still only add up to 400 million, less than the 497 million you claim. I assume not every ship in the fleet is a large star destroyer. Honestly, your crew numbers are way too low, and your casualty figures are way too high. A modern carrier has a crew of 5,000 men, so it's not realistic at all for a "large planet destroyer" to have a crew of merely 400. Nor is it at all realistic for hundreds of millions of men to die in every battle. At that point, it feels like you're just trying to impress your readers with big numbers.
What is grimdark enough to be grimdark? on 8/27/2022 9:38:55 PM
I’ve never been under the impression that any of those three genres requires a supernatural threat.