Lactose, The Reader

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1/10/2017

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Temporary account for SonicTurboTurtle until he is cleansed of his cancerous ways in the CYS rehab center.

Recent Posts

Critique my writing? on 1/14/2017 2:32:37 PM

I don't think you really even need anything after "You awaken to Papa gently shaking you". I would cut it off there.


Sonic's motivational thread. on 1/11/2017 2:44:23 AM

It's been a while and I've been working for a fair amount on this story in the past couple months. I'm a little over halfway through with the second -and last- main path. Still gotta fix the shitty beggining and add a ton of pages in general though. It's coming along.

Oh. And if anyone's wondering why I'm on a different account, well... it's a long fucking story. 


Axiom's Art on 1/10/2017 11:53:52 PM

Amazing! A few of these look straight out of an anime.


Friend, well someone had to do it on 1/10/2017 11:30:35 PM

@JJJ-thebanisher

Should the title of this thread be censored?


Home Page on 1/10/2017 11:27:31 PM

I vote for Avery M.