haha his stories are really well done! 

You could maybe do that Raider ending for Ground Zero?  That would be pretty cool.  Or maybe go back into Alpha Wolf?  Make a World of Darkness like universe?  Nice job world building also, kind of wondering now who these spiritual beings or gods are that gave the Necromancer directions to go between worlds.  Is there any sort of plan behind the scenes to initially coax the Necromancer into killing his world, then killing others?  

So I guess canonically Aron/Rogue is a bachelor, Spymaster, and sort of just waiting for Tanya?  What would happen if he simply just gave Tanya his soul?  Would that result in them being together?  I was thinking if both of them wanted to be together, for eternity even, then wouldn't it make sense for Aron the Rogue to just sign a contract with Tanya (could even be a marriage contract or something) and just give Tanya his soul?  

Hey! Been a long time fan of yours.  Hit up this site and just finished your latest story.  So my few questions are the following:

1. Is Eternal Bliss the "canon" or at least "your canon" Eternal ending based on Semra's path?  I was hoping for Eternal Emperor or Eternal Patriot to be canon, as those were my 2 favorite endings. 

2. Love the names William, Azrael, Francis (revealed before I know), and Aron.  

3. Have we met Sinthinia before?  I forget.

4. Based on this story, it would seem either Rogue Nation or Hero of Holgard (my personal favorite) is the "canon" ending to Rogues right?  Which is it though? 

5. Love your work a lot again!  Will we get more?  The ever present villains like Big Red, Dendrin, Semra, and the Necromancer are all begging for a reckoning, either that or we can have more stories on how they thrive in their endeavors.   

Can we get a sequel? Or at least a spinoff?  I know Rogues kinda was a spinoff of sorts.  But we want more from you! 

Wow, that was a nice story on par with Eternal.  Perhaps in many ways I enjoyed it better than Eternal.  Keep it up Endmaster! Several thoughts and commentary *SPOILERS BELOW* :

1.  Endmaster's stories all have 1 template for a girlfriend/lover, with surface variations.  They all tend to have a strong personality, nurturing, have mental baggage, either manipulative or naive, selfish (most would betray protagonist if he didn't change for them or meet their standards), sexually and romantically forward (even shamelessly slutty sometimes), and all of them either match or exceed the protagonist in an area of skill/power/planning.  

2. The Kingdom path...was sadly not a path at all.  Perhaps a false choice.  Would like to see an expansion where we get to do more stuff in what seems to be the capital city in the area.  Perhaps join and rise up in the Ebon Claw Syndicate?  

3. Sucks there wasn't a path to save the Thieves Guild, although I guess the Nocturnal League path was basically it.  But would have been cool for a path that preserved the Thieves Guild and its principles and characters.  

4. The Ebon Claw Syndicate was frustratingly too powerful.  I mean I get the Crimson Talons couldn't stand up to them.  But the Nocturnal League also cooperated with law enforcement and politicians and had magic allies to balance out shadow magic.  There should have been an option to go to war with the ECS and come out on top.  So I think that path should not have been forced to pay tribute if they didn't want to.  The Nocturnal League in the Rogue Nation path should have been even more powerful because they weren't even infiltrated.  I was hoping for an option to war with the ECS and beat them as the Nocturnal League.  

5. Crimson Talons path should have had an option to build up and dominate like the Nocturnal League or ECS.  Sadly wasn't a choice where the team could rise up the ranks.  Maybe ally with a the local mages and bump off Reynolds and secure political influence/power? 

6. The independent plotline should have had a Romance Epilogue with Heather.  

7. So, the Rogue sleeps with his sister and in the epilogue do they get together?  Kind of weird but would like to see a firm resolution on this hilarious and awesome cliffhanger.  

8. Dendrin?Fel should have a story one day where a guy finally kicks his ass.

9. Pirate and Galpatis storyline were cut too short, hopefully we get an expansion where you become Privateer/Pirate or some sort of future changing guy in Galpatis.  

10.  The Protaganist doesn't seem to be exceedingly good at building up an organization without either Demonic help (Reynolds/Tanya).  There seems to be a glass ceiling where the protagonist's organization and leadership skills just stagnate to the point where either the Klyton Militia or the ECS forces him to relocate.  He is frustratingly bad at going up against the ECS even with mage allies and the literal government behind him.  Having Holgard or Jicol's entire state behind him, the protagonist shouldn't have been owned by the ECS every time they directly fought against them (again related to my above comment that I think the plotline should have had an option to win against the ECS as either Holgard's Spymaster, Jicol's Nocturnal League, or Holgard & Jicol's Nocturnal League).

Overall! A+ on the well written and engaging story.  Hoping for a storyline from the POV of the Bard Sister. 

Hey EndMaster, love all your stories man. Good job!

I have several questions:

1. Why couldn't the Eternal ever just kill Semra/Mistress with her knife AND live happily ever after with his lover? That would have been the ultimate revenge that would have just been satisfying. Killing Elodith just wasn't enough. 

2. Regarding Ground Zero, I really was wondering why you didn't have a Raider epilogue where the guy just built a Raider kingdom. 

3. What is the connection exactly between Mortos, Casimir & Nicodemus, and the Necromancer, and finally Dendrin?

3.5 How did the Necromancer's book ever come to the Eternal's world? 

3.6 In the Eternal Emperor ending, I'm guessing technology never advanced to the point where the Eternal could have had has brain placed in a human looking Android that never ages? And why didn't the Eternal's wife do the same thing with the brain in the vat?

4. In the Eternal Terror ending, why couldn't the Eternal ever become powerful enough to ascend to Dendrin's place while maintaining his consciousness? 

5. Great job on all your stories. Hope you don't stay in retirement too long!