Wassup! it is good to be back! I have increased my vocab, descriptive skills, and overall experience. My C.Y.S version of my original novel, "Biohorde" kinda bombed and did NOT show off my book too well. I will be making several stories of cryptids, mythical creatures that are said to exist, and S.C.P's. I want constant feedback other than humiliating, pride damaging, idiotic patronizing from my family. I am somewhat of a professional and if i said I did bad, then I did bad. I expect STRICT FLAW-REPORTING , and some compliments (But dont be stupid with it)

Your brother has been commited to the asylem in your home town. He and his friends had went to the woods for a camping trip. After missing for a week the five-o went to the camp site and found him as the only known survivor and the bloodied remains of one of his friends, the other is missing. The bones had little ridges, they had been chewed clean of any meat. The only thing he would say was, "It was him, he made do it. Said it was the only way." "Who did?" you asked. After a few seconds he whispered, "The Wendigo."

You have 5 variables (You have no health because all damage is insta-kill. There will be no minor injuries.): SCORE, AMMO, CLIP, POWER, and SANITY.

SCORE: your actions may increase your score.

AMMO: ammo is your total amount of bullets.

POWER: Power is your batery life. i thought of making batteries a variable but i decided it should be items.

SANITY: how close you are to transforming into a WENDIGO.

Good luck. you'll need it! >)

Okay! i have decided to put the horde and dead space on hold and go for something a little different; a little simpler. Cryptids. i have a lot of background information on cryptids and have done research on them. the first three will be the Jersey Devil, The Windego, and the Mothman in no particular order.

haha, you can't meet people like this in person. to much... inhibition. no need for that stuff on the internet. as a matter of fact im more insane than edgar allan poe AND vincent van gogh!

It would be cool, if it doesn't have it already and if it does then can you tell me how, if you could access some sort of link map where it shows what link goes to which outcome. for example a tree map.

i see your point... how bout this. can y'all send me a message when you post a reply for my forum. or you can send a message saying what you said in the forum.

I now have a question. how do i make the pictures in "MY PICTURES" to get in the gallery to use on games? plz send me a message QUICK!!

i need some easy to understand advice on variables and item use. i think i understand the basics. plz message me because i dont check the forums alot

crud i mean new now... oh well i cant blame auto correct now... haha

Hello I'm now too! just started at 10-24-12. i had just finished an advanced story as my first story and i'm pretty proud of it! you should check it out; it is called, "The Horde"...by... ME! lol. but i digress, the point is, i need some feedback on it and some POLITE  criticism.  

I am really only tied to horror and fantasy but i am very good at plots and twists! if you need any help ill be glad to.

I have started on oct. 24th and began an advanced story. while i am an experienced author despite being a teen this style of writing is utterly new to me. any advice for a young horror writer?