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I've been looking around the community lately for animal based CYS games. I'm a warrior cats fan, needless to say, and the games I see lately usually take the plot or structure from previous games, which in my opinion, takes out a lot of thrill in playing out the story.

So, I am currently making a Warriors CYS. Warning: Spoiler Alert in the CYS / Sneak Peek!

It will be called Warrior Cats:: Power Of The Lake. There are eight cats, whom are born with the power to control the Clans fates. In the game, new Clans are formed, and many things roll out to contribute to StarClan's prophecy. Just because I wanted to, the main character's past life is Fluttering Bird (The character the player gets to play through). For those of you that don't know, re-encarnation comes true in warrior cats.

SkyClan also is in this prophecy, as well as rogues and kittypets. Each cat has a special talent; Half have physical talents, useful in Clan life, which in this case is combat. The other half is mental or psychic talents, which many will see with brother-sister bonds, or medicine cats-every cat bonds.

There is going to be so much action in the story, I think it might just take warrior cats to a new level. To me, anyways. If you don't play warrior cats, just look it up on youtube or wikipedia or something. There are books about warrior cats, nevertheless, so many fans who have read them  will just eat this game up like KFC with bacon!

If you have any ideas, questions, or comments about the game, the story, the characters, and etc., feel free to post here! (To Be Honest, it might just make the game even better.)

I'm always had a problem with the way they hand-waved Cinderpelt/heart's reincarnation. I understand it all fit in the story but beyond that there wasn't really a reason to give her a 2nd chance. Plenty of warriors died in the series in similar ways. Meh.

Anywa'ys what are the new clans going to be based on/called and will it be after the final book?

Yes, it will be after the final book. There will be no cats from the last series of books, meaning it's long after that generation. The new Clans... I'd rather have you guys find it out by yourselves, but why not? A sneak peek, one of the new Clans will be called FireClan. The leader is a descendant of Firestar, but I really don't want to reveal his or her awesome warrior name and clan rules, code, etc. It would spoil it way too much! The new Clans will be based on things the Clans fear, though.

Plus, I actually understood why they did that. Cinderpelt wasn't supposed to become a medicine cat and was supposed to fall in love with Fireheart or something until Tigerclaw interfered. They let her have another chance by becoming Cinderheart, allowing her to become a warrior again.

My problem with Warrior CYS Is this is how the recent ones have been.

Note:Not saying yours will be this, just an observation.

"Oh, I r kittypet /rogue"

"Oh, I ir hit another clan member"

"Oh, I immediatly join clan"
End.

And I'm just sitting here like "God damnit"

Yeah, that just makes me feel like raging. It literally makes no sense! There are none at all where you're actually born into the Clan! And then usually your mate dies or something. That's why I'm making this one in the first place. I'm not done typing up the nursery pages (Hey, don't blame me, blame the terrors of school) but so far it's turning out pretty good.

You have to read a lot, but if you're a real warrior cats fan or bookworm like me, you'll actually be interested in reading it because I'm trying to use the same writing style as the Erin Hunters. Which is, something tragic / suspenseful happens every time! *Gasp!*

I'll be very interested in reading it. Make sure to show that the villain is doing things in the background while the character wanders around. :)

They do the rogue/loner thing so they can have that freedom from birth-clan obligation.

at last another earthbound fan....!

Seriously dude, stop asking about that game. It's getting old. :)

What. I don't like Earthbound. I just used this name because my best friend likes Earthbound. Though I do like using Lucas in Super Mario Bros... Anyways, I sorta need some co-authors I can trust because at this rate, I'm going to be done with it at the end of time. by next year. Which would suck. And I'd literally hate that.

Yeah I love that book series, my main problem with the ones on the site are-

1. Way to short.
2. Explain Nothing.
3. Much like Jihelu's problem the story is just Rogue, clan, mate your done.
4. No clear ending the Warrior books had a clear ending at the end these don't.

Who the fuck said you could use my name

I will end you

>Warrior books had a clear ending.

Last time I checked it had like four fucking series.
I stopped after one
Too much shit was going on. Too. Much. 
Then they started to get all spiritual with cat jesus land, I personally think the series escalated far too quickly for my liking.

lol There was some spiritual stuff but not that much.

Spoilers below.

1st series: Basically Firestar saves all of the clans and kills off Scourge which massivly weakens the urban Bloodclan. So far so good for the cats.

2nd series: Starclans says the forest will die soon, sends some cats off to find a new home. Meanwhile back at home Thunderclans deals with an invasion of badgers and theres is some clan infighting(?). Also the ToRW is discovered.

3rd series: Super-powered cats are given birth. A loner cat named Sol screws with prophecy and basically mind-rapes the three cats. More clan fighting and Hollyleaf gets pissed for not being part of the prophecied three.

4th series: Dark-Cat's invades forest, forest fights back with starclan cats. The series ends with the Dark-Cat's defeated and the clans scarred for life. Also I think starclan is now hated or something like that.

Well... I don't really know anything about warrior cats, but uh... I like action games and it sounds like it could be an interesting world to screw around in, so go for it.

Just because of this comment, I'm adding stuff where you learn... And then something happens that can change the story.

You mean like background info? That's always good to have in a story, even if it is a fanfic.

Okay, just to be clear, due to so much inactivity, and that I probably have about 1/8 - 1/4 of this game done by now, I need just one or two co-authors to help. If I can't get any help, this is probably going to be done by next year. -_- If I got more help, it'd be done by maybe a month or two I'm guessing, and you guys would be able to see it. I'm thinking about making a demo as well, and then deleting it after the whole project itself is finished. Also, if you'd like to be a co-author, show me an example of your writing style / skills / creativity, and I will choose maybe one or two. Note, for all of you who just want to be co-author so you can delete all the hard work, before I post it I will put up the demo, and I'm sure I can work from there. Thank you all for your support, and have a merry Christmas!