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Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

I've begun working on my first story game for the site and want to know if people would be interested in playing it. What I basically want to know is If people would like to have this game on the site before i put forth all the effort. The game is titled Guerilla. It's a game about guerilla warfare in different wars throughout history. Different wars include WW2, The Vietnam war, The American Revolution and the Russian-Afghanistan  war.  Each will have at least two different stories of guerilla's to play. You basically can experience many different forms of historical guerilla warfare.

Like I said there will be many different stories to play from many wars. The oldest war being the American Revolution although I may turn back the dial a little bit more to the French and Indian war If that's what people want. The most recent of these wars is the war on terror.

If people want me to I'll do a story set in the west  during the American Revolution. Also tell me if you want me to cover the Mexican-American war or the Korean war or the Texas Revolution or the war of 1812 or all of them.

Please leave comment on what you think and any suggestions or Ideas you have. Also whether or not you want me to include segments on the listed things above.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

I read the description of the game and I think that it'll be awesome! I love history and I think you should go for it( just make sure grammar and punctuation is up to standard).

I suggest a path where you play as a Cuban rebel back in the 50s. These rebels set forward the textbook example of how to fight guerilla style. It was the first thing that came into mind when I saw your game title.

Anyways... good luck and have a great time writing!

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

I'll do research on the Cuban rebels. It will be more work but I do want to make Guerilla as good as it can be.

Also thanks for the support.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

The gams seems interesting and like a solid idea, but for it to be any good it would require a shit ton of hard work. You should really make sure you're willing to put in all the work required before you start, or you'll either phone it in and make a shitty, forgettable game, or just abandon it at some point. 

Also, you said it'll extend to the war on terror., and the stories are of the guerrillas. Are you saying your game would have me play as Al-Qaida? Because that would be insanely ballsy and amazing.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

Any side in which civilians fought in any war covered in Guerilla is likely to have path for it at least once. So yes you will get to play as Al-Queida. While I don't  support them they are the main Guerilla fighters in the war on terror so it would be really misleading not to include a path on them.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago
It's fine, just make it so every path with them leads to a terrible death, lol.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

Wouldn’t a successful suicide bomber/mission sort of be considered a “win” in their case anyway?

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

Sorry if I offended anyone. It's just that they're the main Guerilla's in the war.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

Huh, interesting. Yeah, leaving out Al Qaeda would be stupid, you should put them in.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

This sounds very interesting.

Playing as Al-Qaeda would be really interesting... though it might offend some people, so you'd rather not. But if you want to do it, just... be careful.

Or just make a fictional faction based on Al-Qaeda or ISIS.

WW2 partisans, Vietcong, Mujahideen, Patriots, all of them are interesting. I'd say do the one that you like and fond of the most.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

Just saying, it's the hundred year anniversary of the start of the Irish War of Independence, which was a huge part of WW1, the collapse of the British Empire and featured extensive Guerilla Warfare. Plus, I feel patriotic.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

Thanks, I'll have to look into that. I'm sure it will not disappoint.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

Doing it all at once would be tedious. You should only do one of them. Just saying.

And be sure to do the one you know the most.

I know the Tiger tank better than any other German tank (well, it's the most known heavy tank after all), so I'm doing a Tiger instead of a Panzer III in the early wars or a Panther in late war. Beside, making up stuff for the Tiger is easier. And I like the tank more.

Be sure to do the one you're comfortable with. And have enough research.

I know most about WW2, so you can ask me if you want to.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

Not really sure why you felt the need to bring up that you like tanks in a situation that in no way possible called for you to talk about tanks, but OK.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

You know... guerilla tanks. Like moles, but with tanks.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

Certain rebel groups were supplied with tanks from other countries via secret deals while other rebel groups stole government tanks.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

Vietcong was supplied by the USSR. The T-34/85 is still used by a few countries and guerillas.

But guerillas always play hide and seek. Both Soviet and US lost at their first engagement with guerilla forces like that (Mujahideen and Vietcong). But then, they learned from their mistakes.

Soviet's motorized formation was ineffective in Afghanistan. Due to the terrain, armored vehicles' advantages were nullified. Oh, and sandstorms.

Soviet invasion of Afghanistan was like US Vietnam war anyway.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

I've been thinking about it and maybe I'll split Guerilla Into different parts and have each part feature a certain sets of wars.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

How many pages will each war be?

Also, ever heard of Polish resistance fighters during WW2? Armia Krajowa? Their tale is really interesting.

The German soldiers using Polish women as meatshields was really... an underhanded action.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago
I like gorillas. Will there be bananas? :)

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

He could always add a Planet of the Apes fanfic path where the evolved apes are using hit and run tactics to take down the remnants of the much stronger human strongholds.

Guerilla storygame interest

8 years ago

DICKS OUT FOR MF HARAMBE