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My Story

12 years ago

Hey guys, I don't want to waste any time so I'll just get straight into it.

The storygame I'm making is horror/puzzle. You will have to play it more than once to get the best ending and it will probably annoy some of you. What I mean is that there are places you go first before you go to other places an it has to be in that order to get the best ending.
And I was also wondering if putting in a walkthrough would be better.

My Story

12 years ago

I'm not exactly sure what you're asking of us.

My Story

12 years ago

My guess is that he's fishing for opinions, and such.

Sounds okay to me. Be careful though, the threshold between a difficult story and a story that's so frustrating that people will quit and never speak of it again is smaller than people often realize.

My Story

12 years ago

If it's a good story, people will want to try it again to see other (better) endings.