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Don't question "why".

Question "why not".

"Sleep Addict"

By Tim

... I know that I should prob'ly get to sleep...
... But I'm having soooo much fun, I can't sleep... a peep...
... and though I ti-re of counting sheep...
... I just can't bring my...
... bring myself to fall asleep.

Playing some games, going on for-ums,
These are all things that I like to do.
People call me cray-cray, I just ignore them,
Let's fight the world, just me and you.
Get with the flow, and with the force and
We'll be our own... army of two.
To hell with the rules, we don't enforce 'em.
Let's just break loose,

Before I come to.

It's been a pretty long day, I admit...
... but feeling ti-red isn't on... my list...
... I can't bring myself past all this...
... so it's time to move on...
... move on past the dark abyss.

Playing some games, going on for-ums,
These are all things that I like to do.
People call me cray-cray, I just ignore them,
Let's fight the world, just me and you.
Get with the flow, and with the force and
We'll be our own... army of two.
To hell with the rules, we don't enforce 'em.
Let's just break loose,

Before I come to.

... my eyes are starting to droop low...
... my movements are starting to stiff... and slow...
... Dunno what I'm gonna do, though...
... If you're in my dreeeams, again
If you're in my dreams, I don't know...

Playing some games, going on for-ums,
These are all things that I like to do.
People call me cray-cray, I just ignore them,
Let's fight the world, just me and you.
Get with the flow, and with the force and
We'll be our own... army of two.
To hell with the rules, we don't enforce 'em.
Let's just break loose,

Before I come to.

... before I come to...

Just something I put together in the span of about 5-10 minutes. I tend to do that.

What do you guys think?

Now, if you'll excuse me, I must actually go to sleep now.

Good day.

*Exit stage left*

You can't really get opinions on songs without at least humming the general gist of the song first. I can imagine this as rap, alternative, pop, soooo many other things cos it has the potential to give off so many different vibes. The most you can ask for is feedback on the lyrics.

Oh hey this WAS a thing I did!

Well, I haven't really decided on a tune just yet, and I'm alternating between rap and some sort of soft-spoken guitar.

And apparently feedback on the lyrics was all I needed.

Or not.

I don't really care all that much.

Alternating between rap and soft-spoken guitar?

Why alternate?

Goddamnit, Sent.

I imagine this as a rap. Either way, it's a good one, m8.

I imagine it being sung by Spongebob Squarepants.

This is now a knockoff version of "Best Day Ever" in my mind.

Goddamnit, now it's in my head too, and I made the damn thing.

...I'm sorry.

... thank you.

And now it's even more stuck in my head! Is that a good thing?

Whoa! Nice job.

When I said you could do any drugs other than meth I didn't mean at the same time.

Too late.

Yeah, this should be a rap.

This is me when you drop your phone in a toilet: 

(Imagine it as "You used to call me on your cellphone" backround music and tune)

Dude, what happened to your cellphone?

You're going to need a plan.

I suggest duck tape and a stick,

So you don't get pee pee hands.

You know when you need to dry,

I suggest you use rice.

Put it in a plastic bag, wait a few days and see what you have. :)

Don't worry, I don't hurt you,
Unless you struggle, then it hurt.

Khan was dreamin' when he wrote this,
Apologize if go astray,
But I woke up this morning, and really ruined China's day.
Sky was full of arrow,
Lots of peasant runnin' everywheres.
Tryin' to run from Genghis,
You know I hardly even cares.

Cause they say the Khanate's over,
But it is only just beginings!
And Khan is gonna party like in year 1-2-O-5!

Prince!? Dude, too soon!

Look what you've done to our beloved Genghis. You ruined him with Pop and 90s Gothic culture!

WHAT!?

Sentinel, do you tell me that this offense is not executed for!? HE JUST CALLED PRINCE GOTHIC! EVEN I KNOW PRINCE IS LIKE THE OPPOSITE!

I did not mean that part.

And to be honest, I am confused why I have not been executed yet.

In mother Mongolia, we shoved up mason jars in assholes for ignorances that are this!

Shh, Sent, if you didn't know Kiel outlawed that term.

It was worth it that one time. Genghis doesn't repeat his material.

Unless it's the feigned retreat. You'd think they would've caught on by the time he owned most of the known world...

You know hat they say. Oldie but is goodlie.

Unlike Prince, who could not be with us so long... *Single, silent, manly tear.*

Maybe if Genghis did not be dragged hundreds of years in magic portaloo, he would have better sense of timing!

There there, you're in a state of shock. We must get you back to the freaking ports thing to save you before it's too late!

Am I the only one who pictured this as something out of "Les Miserables"?

I know this is a semi-old thread, but someone should totally write a version Les Miserables with CYS members. Maybe add humor, too. And change up the plot to fit with it being set on the site. Or maybe just not make it at all.

Good idea, Chris.

Especially the last part. :p

Kidding, of course. I think it's a great idea.