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Don't know how I missed these before, but so far I've liked them both. Keep up the good work.

Goddamit, I want to read them but this stupid library filter keeps blocking content I want to see on this website. I can't even get on IBV's profile. It always happens when I'm in the middle of reading your storygames too, EndMaster.

Is the incest one the one that drew your eye? xD 

While she did put that in big capital letters as one of the advertisements, but really what caused me to read it is the fact that several people in the comment section were comparing it to Love SICK.

So I read that story and her other one and made this thread, because I feel its important to encourage such promising talent in young writers on this site.

It's worse than Love SICK? I'll go explore it's dark corridors some time later.

The story of course we're talking about is Dispiteous.

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/dispiteous

Chris and Fazz thought it was worse than Love SICK
Kiel didn't think it was as bad as LS (And then went into a pretty detailed response)

It depends on your point of view I suppose. IBV's story involves playing as the victim who is also a little girl. The brutality that can happen to a little girl and her entire family probably makes it darker since it isn't played for laughs.

LS on the other hand is reveling in being a complete psychopath which to some people might actually think is worse. LS probably gets slightly more graphic in parts, but since its over the top it's more funny than anything else…well to some people that is.

Her other story Atramentous...

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/atramentous

is probably a better horror story, but I enjoyed her other one more.

Glad to see you enjoyed them! They were both pretty rushed and I'm looking forward to publishing a slightly longer (and hopefully better) one soon. 

the story was pretty good. continue to create new stories!