This is my first story.. Please do not delete it.
Feel free to comment.

Congrats! well it is  good to see that there are less stories that are either too short or either not good.
 

well i played monster rancher 2 for a span of 13 years. knowing every trick you could use to have the perfect unlimited and undying monster.

recently clash of clans used up my time.

first game is necromancer. well i was a new one that time and i was very overwhelmed with the story.

well it may also count for that. however, loading times of games is now faster compared to the 199x. it is just a common observation compared when we were kids well i do sure know that there are a lot of studies/research now.

Also we do also play electronics during those my preteens but the time consumed by kids on games today is much higher than before. tablet has become their virtual nanny now. 

Well the problem with kids nowadays are they are too impatient and their attention span is very low because of electronics. i have notice a few kids playing games in tablet that switches games very often. also electronics became their nanny which may inhibits their social kids. though it is still a case to case basis. and everything in moderation is ok and good. 

Want to congratulate you for making a great game. A little twisted but that is why i really like your stories. Creating multiple path and making a world of stories interconnected continues to amazed me. i still have not finished all the epilogues. thanks.

well the best game for me was death song. though the prerequisite for it is to finish first necromancer. given endmaster is really a great writer and he has a lot of great stories here.

want to give props to simplesabbey for making the secret of daphne.. it was a very good game,

looking forward reading a lot of stories next month.. well i am more of a reader than a writer but hopefully i am able to get the skills in writing a good game by reading these one..

You wont join the contest?

i rate it as 5.. well that is the best that i can give. maybe you can edit to give it more story line and more option..