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This is part of my story.

A music teacher murders a boy, (VERY GRAPHIC) Then the music teacher gets taken to jail for murder, then breaks out of prison on a drug overdose, sent to an Asylum, breaks out of there and the next day killed by lethal injection.

Sounds like the entire story. If the teacher is going to break out of all these places, have him/her kill more people. Also go through scenes describing what the teacher is thinking whilst in prison (not jail - prison is for murder) so that you can illustrate a large-scale plan in the readers' mind.

Not sure what you mean by "Too Bad for a story", but graphic content is allowed so long as you rate the age limit accordingly.

No, for graphical limit I would ask a Mod/Admin or Endmaster because he probably hit the limit with his stories. lol 

I would think that as long as you don't directly focus on describing the murders; just mentioning it and the result; should be fine. 

I'm still wondering how the protagonist got lethal injection one day after he escaped from the asylum. What did they do capture him and stab him with a syringe right there on the street?

 

It would go in line with being 'Graphical' I guess?