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So, now that I've finished chapter 7 and done a bit of re-writing, it's time to get started on chapter 8... Which basically means that I have to re-write the massive battle scene at the end to incorporate 5 different stats instead of the original 2... This should be fun >.<

Ooo! Ooo! Briar, pick me! Pick me! Briar! I wanna test it!

When it's done *pats head*

Sounds great!

... Wow, re-reading this part of the game makes me realize how rushed it was. Seriously, even for a rushed project I should've done better than that! I mean the first time you kill someone it's just like. "You kill a small child. They're dead... What are you waiting for? No time to think about what you've done. You're in the middle of a fight. Chop chop! Back to it! ... Also Rhode's nice and you have to like her now." ... I seriously wrote that? 

Totes should every time someone dies.  Build a freaking harem while you're at it.

... Well, this chapter might take awhile. I've just finished writing the plan for it and it's gonna have 144 pages. Luckily most of it should be copying and pasting, but still that's a lot of work. >.<

Is it a lot of similar pages with a few alterations?

I've found while the copy/paste bit makes that easy, it does make it feel like a boring slog when you're actually doing it. You usually have to double check a few times just to make sure you didn't copy/paste the wrong page.

Yeah, that's pretty much it. Like, there'll be several versions of the same page, depending on who's dead and how you attack someone and what colour shoes you're wearing, ect.

Good luck! ^^

Well it's taken me all afternoon and most of yesterday, but now I can proudly say that... I've finished 6 of the 173 pages that're supposed to be in this chapter... ... ... Yey >.<

And now I've finished 13 pages... Hopefully things will go quicker when I get to the actual fighting.

Woot? (\o_o/)

So, this is going to be finished in what year? 

Not looking good TBH. Right now I'm focussing on getting the first part of the game re-written and then, which hopefully will be done in the net month or two. After that... Meh, depends on real life stuff I guess.

Back from taking a week off due to being in a play. Anyways, I've decided to split the big fight into 2 chapters since it's so long. Chapter 9 will be the big fight and chapter 8 will be everything leading up to the big fight. So... I've finished chapter 8. Yey! 

Whoot whoot! \(>∇<)/

A play you say?

XD And chapter 9 is only going to be the first quarter of the fight, right? :P

Hey, @Briar_Rose are you dead?

She hasn't been online for a while now; I say it's safe to assume she is.

I'd say she's probably writing ilike Quiller (and me, and EndMaster and others): typing it on another medium (Twine, MS) before pasting it on CYS. She doesn't have to be logged in to be working on the story.

She often mentions that she's busy with work a lot so it could be just real life stuff getting in the way as usual.