Hello everyone.
I'm currently working on a story, but I'm not entirely sure what kind of style of writing you guys enjoy. If you could read the short passage below and give some constructive feedback on what needs improving, if I should just change the writing style completely, etc. that would be awesome.
Thanks in advance,
HJPike
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------The road to Fallum Regus, as scenic as it may be, is tedious. To your left and right are great fields of crop such as sugar and barley with trees scattered sporadic across the landscape. Even farther in distance than the swathes of harvest stand towering mountains, covering the horizon and reaching up to the sky as if to tease man of his mortality.
But, fenced off as the expanses may be, you and Livia occasionally vault over the barriers when in need of a rest, taking solace from the sun whenever possible. She had packed much in the way of food and clothes and luckily for you she remembered your favourite dish was cheese, which she had brought along in copious amounts.
