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A demo where I utilize the advanced editor to create a short story whilst allowing your choices to drastically change what happens!

Please give feedback on choices etc first time through!

When you do that there should be another post of mine below, read it AFTER you read the story once. :D

Thanks for reading this thread!

LINK - http://chooseyourstory.com/story/nox-and-lux - LINK

Ugh, I can't make this invisible, so... don't read this until you do what I asked above xD

Thanks for reading my story! Please go through it again (mainly if you got the death ending).

Also take note that the first thing you read here, was a LIE. I done it since I wanted feedback on how it makes it feel when you make choices the first time through. Take for example, Mass Effect, if you could just press go back to change your choice, you might notice they don't matter THAT much (some of them anyways). And now you can give feedback on my actually writing! (if you didn't already) :D

What?

I don't get what you're saying in the post here.

The story was fine. It was odd in that random choices seemed to have extreme effects (right vs. left), but its fine.

I think I rushed when typing those two posts. But basically

this thread = me being happy that I wrote more then 2 pages and knowing that publishing is bad xD