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The Awesume (Riddles & Puzzles 2016 contest)

9 years ago

Somebody had better read this storygame to convince this writer to not publish it.  No, do not listun to my edutor.  He is just jelus.  No, I am somebody who recognizes that what you wrote is absolutely insane.  That ain't be right 'cause what I done did write is amazinger and more trickyer than anythang evur.

Just look at your spelling.  Not one sentence was without flaw.  You should be ashamed of yourself.  Well, I ain't feelin' ashamed.  At least have somebody read the storygame.  It has four riddles by the way.  Do you meen havin' a uzer proofread it?  Yes, the user could also give you advice like... do not publish this horrible excuse for a storygame!

I thinks that your idea be guud.  I do be happy if somebudy proofreads my storygame.  I named it The Awesume bekuz it is awesume.  Here be the link.  Please be truthful and tell this writer all of the things which were done incorrectly.  I didain't do nuthin' incorrekt!  We should let a proofreader decide that.

The Awesume (Riddles & Puzzles 2016 contest)

9 years ago
Sounds fun! I like the bantering thing you have going on there, lol. I'm busy with my own submission, but this looking kinda interesting... Good luck with it!

The Awesume (Riddles & Puzzles 2016 contest)

9 years ago

How cuuld you be tooo buzey for my supu-de-dupa story?  Maybe she is writing a storygame for the contest since she stated that very thing.  Oops, I made a mistakke.  I forgotted to reads that part.  You are more insane than Ziggy Stardust.  Who dun be that?  Oh, forget it.  I hope your Survival of the Fittest goes well, Breezy.

The Awesume (Riddles & Puzzles 2016 contest)

9 years ago

It's probably not fair for me to comment/rate on a 'competing' entry after it's been published, but I did go through it. I'll just say that I laughed out loud and I got all the riddles right on the first try.

The Awesume (Riddles & Puzzles 2016 contest)

9 years ago

I can rate uthur competang storees in the contest?  Yes... what are you thinking?  I cuuld give all of them othur enterees a 1/8 to make mine look more betterer.  Then, I cuuld give myne 40,000 8/8 to done do make my storee the bestest evur.  Not only is that morally wrong, but every single person on this site would notice you (and hopefully ban you).  Aw, you be supur meen.  Also, how coold have Future gotten ev'rythang goodly on his furst try?  Perhaps he is a normal, intelligent human being unlike yourself.  Naw, he must do be lyin'.  Do not pay attention to my associate because he is quite... insane.  Thank you for putting your time into reading his unintelligible writing.  I be awesume!

The Awesume (Riddles & Puzzles 2016 contest)

9 years ago

I don't think ratings actually come into it for this contest, as it's sorted by judges. If you enter you'll be in the pool of judges though, so that's where you could sabotage the good storygames. Although, as you say, that would just be morally wrong...