Somebody had better read this storygame to convince this writer to not publish it. No, do not listun to my edutor. He is just jelus. No, I am somebody who recognizes that what you wrote is absolutely insane. That ain't be right 'cause what I done did write is amazinger and more trickyer than anythang evur.
Just look at your spelling. Not one sentence was without flaw. You should be ashamed of yourself. Well, I ain't feelin' ashamed. At least have somebody read the storygame. It has four riddles by the way. Do you meen havin' a uzer proofread it? Yes, the user could also give you advice like... do not publish this horrible excuse for a storygame!
I thinks that your idea be guud. I do be happy if somebudy proofreads my storygame. I named it The Awesume bekuz it is awesume. Here be the link. Please be truthful and tell this writer all of the things which were done incorrectly. I didain't do nuthin' incorrekt! We should let a proofreader decide that.