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Would anyone be interested in editting Site 59 for grammar or spelling mistakes while I am finishing the other chapters? Word count is 7000 words and 34 pages at the moment. It's only about 1/4 done. Gonna be a long one... :)

Here is the discription for anyone unfamiliar with my story so far...

You and a group of friends decide to go camping for a week, shortly after you graduate high school. Everything starts without a hitch as your adventure begins, until you arrive at the town that you will be camping on the outskirts of. Things feel off about the town, and you even get warned away by the gas station clerk, who tells of people disappearing lately. Though a little put off, your group decides to stay anyway thinking the man is just a paranoid old goat. Little do you know, there is in fact danger lurking in this little town. And one particularly evil man now has his sights squarely on you and your friends... Will you survive this trip, or will you and your friends disappear never to be seen again?

WARNING: This story has some scenes that are graphic, sexual in nature, and very descriptive. It also contains language and violence some readers may not care for. Please do NOT play if you can't handle all of the above.

I'd be happy to do a quick playthrough and point out any glaring spelling/grammar issues, however it might be ideal to wait until it's all written up, as you may decide to rewrite some of the early pages in the meantime. 

By the way, I have no problems with adult themes in games, I think when executed well it adds an extra dimension to a game. It's not a coincidence that most of the best games on this site (and most good movies, for that matter) feature them. 

PS Just had an idea for your story, I think it would be very cool if you were able to play as different characters (like in Homo Perfectus 5). it's a lot more work of course, but it would make the game very replayable. 

Thanks for the offer. I'm pretty much done with the pages I have so far. Now, I'm writing out the different branches of the game. It's very large from that first chapter.