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MYSTERY CYS!

9 years ago

Hey guys, so I´m making a mystery CYS and I need a co-author to help out. I need some fresh ideas for it because my brain hurts and I can´t think of anything right now.

At the airport, a stranger offers your character money to carry a mysterious package onto the plane. The stranger assures your character that it's nothing illegal and points out that it has already been through the security check. Your character has serious doubts, but needs the money, and therefore agrees...

I´ve got a good start on it so far I just need help continuing it. Anybody that doesn´t want to be a co-author but has some good ideas to give would work also. 

MYSTERY CYS!

9 years ago

Okay, I'll give some feedback about proofreading. If you have spelling errors, correct them. Don't just send the game on it's way with 50 errors on a page. That makes you look lazy, or that you rushed it. Take your time, and thoroughly check every page.

Use a dictionary or look up synonyms for a word if you want some intricate lines in your story.

That is all. Good luck with your story!

MYSTERY CYS!

9 years ago

Thank you!