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Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

This will be a thread for posting progress on stories, and random writing blurbs.

A list of my stories and their progress:

Cystia: Rising Hero > 0 Pages/ ?Pages

Green: A Mario Fanfic > 1 Page, 3 links/ ?Pages

Powered Up > 1 page, 3 links/ ?Pages

Quarantined: Hopeful Gloom > 1 page, 1 link/ ?Pages

 

Here's a bit of writing from the universe of Powered Up:

Four men sat at a table in a run-down home, and a swaying light bulb gave off a weak field of light, giving the entire room a grim and grungy feel.

"So, you all know why I brought you here to this 'tea party'" The first man said with a gruff voice. He wore a thick red jacket and spoke with a New York accent.

"Of course, boss!" A scrawny man rubbed his hands together, looking to and fro with shifty eyes. "To discuss the- "

"Shut up!" The Boss yelled slamming his fist on the table. 

The scrawny man flinched, and sat placid in his chair. "Yes, Boss."

"You see," The Boss looked at each of the remaining four men, nodding his head slowly. "We're gonna take out those dirty Blinks who keep showin' up on our turf!"

A portly teen raised his hand. "But Boss," he said, wiping sweat the from his brow. "How are we going to catch 'em? They always get away too fast." The kid frowned.

The scrawny man grins, his mouth stretching to both ends of his face. "Oh, tell 'em boss! Tell 'em!"

The Boss leans back, and lights a cigar, the glowing embers contributing light to the dim scene. "We fix 'em up with a bit of juice." The Boss says with a smirk, taking a draw from his cigar.

"Juice?" The teen leans forward, his frown shifting to a look of confusion. 

The forth man, sitting beside the chubby adolescent laughs. He cracks his neck, "We shock 'em kid! Give those dirty blinkers some juice!" He smiles, patting the kid beside him on the back. "We'll load the Blinks up with a few volts."

"And once they can't blip off away from us, we give those Blinks a little lesson." The Boss blows a cloud of smoke across the table.

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

I'm guessing those are superpower gangs?

I'm looking for any of your games so keep up the progress.

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Yeah, I'll give out their powers later.

Feel free to guess them, though.

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8 years ago

Blinkers can teleport, the other gang controls electricity?

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Yes. Most superhumans (in this world at least) are categorized by what powers they have. Blinkers are a common name for those with the ability to teleport.

None of the gang members can control electricity, so they would need to find someone who can, or buy a few weapons.

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

So electricity can stop a Blinker from teleporting, then?

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8 years ago

Yes. I first saw this idea in the movie "Jumper".

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8 years ago

This sounds awesome. laugh

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8 years ago

I'm going to stalk this now :P

I mean, um...Watch. Yes...that's what I meant.

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8 years ago

YOU'RE FINALLY WORKING ON POWERED UP?! laughlaughlaugh

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Girl, I've always been working on Powered Up.

I guess I'll focus on that one more, since people have interest in it.

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8 years ago

Boss has the ability of power bestowal. He has no control over what ability is received by the target, and can reclaim said ability. He has no powers that directly affect him, and often passes as an average human.

The scrawny man, with the code name: Ghost, can become intangible. He usually utilizes his abilities by passing through objects, and having objects through him.

The chubby teen, with the code name: Brick, has superhuman strength and endurance. He can lift cars with ease, and has bullet-proof skin. He makes a formidable foe in combat.

The forth man, with the code name: Burnout, possess the means to manipulate and control heat, and fire.

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Are these the main characters?

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Nope. Not even close.

I just felt like writing about them.

A teen named Tyler Michael is the main character in Powered Up.

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Looks pretty alright. Keep it up.

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8 years ago

Tyler lay asleep in his bed, tossing and turning. A strange nightmare had his mind in shackles, he sweat heavily, and mumbled things in his sleep.

A recollection of what happened the day before seemed to play on loop in his mind. Tyler was walking home, and a thick sheet of clouds had pulled themselves over the sky. Beams of light streamed down and met with the ground, creating an interesting scene. Tyler's mind drifted to what Sam had told him just moments before. "I think I'm a bit more than capable." Sam's voice rang throughout the streets of Tyler's tortured mind, chiming like a church bell at the top of the hour. What did his friend mean by that?

Nevertheless, Tyler continued to walk home. Just down the street, two figures seemed to be fighting.Tyler couldn't help but shrug. "I wonder who it is this time." He continued to walk down the street. A strange rip in the air opened up, sending a man in a lime-green hooded sweatshirt straight towards him! Tyler luckily dodged the man, as he collided into a nearby car. 

"Aww, man." The man groaned. He went by the name, Lime. Lime was apart of the super-powered gang, The Emeralds. Tyler had only heard of them mentioned on th news, and by people he knew. If he remembered correctly, Lime was a Blaster, a Super with the ability to project energy or elemental power. This was an umbrella term however, so Tyler was unsure of what specific powers this man had.

From a safe distance, hiding behind some nearby bushes, Tyler watched on. From the same portal the man was ejected from, a woman stepped out of. She wore a black uniform with a circular badge on her chest. On the badge was an uppercase 'K' and an equally large red heart. The King of Hearts. This woman was currently in service of the local DECK program, which assigned enlisted individuals to squads of four, with each squadron being listed from one to Jack, similarly to a deck of cards.

Tyler recognized this woman, she was known to the general populace as Rift. She could create small portals to almost anywhere, and was even rumored to be able to open up rifts to her own pocket dimension. In simpler words, Tyler felt safer with a skilled hero around.

The woman had shoulder length, dark brown hair up in a ponytail. She slowly approached Lime, who was laying atop a car. His sudden landing had given the vehicle a large dent on the top, as Lime sat limp in the new divot. "Have you had enough yet?" She asked, stepping closer.

Lime groaned and rolled off the car. "I could do this all day." Lime coughed. He raised a finger asking for a pause as he beat his chest, and spit out a blood infused loogie. "That's better." Slightly turning his head, Lime reached his hand out to the dented car, streams of electricity came jumping into his fingertips. He swiftly raised an outstretched hand, with his palm facing the woman. "Ah, don't move sweetie."

Rift rolled her eyes. She lunged at him, and Lime released a burst of electricity aimed at her chest.

*To Be Continued*

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8 years ago

*Continued*

The bolt of electricity is absorbed into the woman's body, as a small vortex is opened in her chest, and quickly closed. Rift throws a punch, knocking Lime back onto the car.

"Oh yeah, I forgot you could do that." He bumps his head on the hood of the car. Lime rolls off of the automobile, allowing a flow of energy escape from his palms. With the full mass of the car in his control, he flings it forward, coming into contact with Rift. She grunts as she lands on her back. "All this trouble for a little crystal..." Lime pulls a small purple and blue crystal from his pocket. 

"You have no idea what that contains." Rift climbs to her feet. 

"Oh, do I?" Lime mocks, raising an eyebrow and placing a hand on his chest. "I believe I know a bit more than you thin-" Lime is cut off as Rift opens up a portal above his head, casting lightning down onto him. "Ow! Hey!" is struck by the bolt of electricity, it singes his clothes. He stumbles, regaining his balance.

Rift then rips open another vortex, this one at his feet. He falls into a abyss of infinite gloom. "Off to the containment center. They'll take care of him from here." Rift looks around, noting that the fight generated only a minute amount of damage, with a single damaged car, and a discolored patch of cement. She pushed her hand out, away from her sides, allowing a portal to engulf her.

"Whoa." Tyler gasped. It wasn't every day you got to witness a Super battle and come out unscathed. Tyler remembered many times he was injured due to fights between heroes and villains. "Today must be my lucky day." He noted as he walked down the street, and off to his home.

Tyler let the door slam behind him, as he set his backpack down near the kitchen table. He would probably do his homework later that night. He only had a few problems to finish in his math class, and a few chapters to read in a book assigned in his English class. After the whole ordeal with the Supers, and the long walk home, Tyler was ready to take a nap. He flopped on his bed, and found himself drifting off to a peaceful slumber.

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Still writing down ideas for Powered Up. Things like a cannibalistic vigilante and mutant family will soon be fleshed out. I'll probably write some blurbs for 'em.

The going is slow due to school and such.

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

I'm busy with other stuff too. Good luck, nonetheless.

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Thanks, Raven.

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8 years ago

Well, I more or less forgot about this. I'll start to write more.

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8 years ago

This is the prologue for my soon-to-be superhero role play, and gives some insight into my story, Powered Up!

Also, I have decided that the title, Powered Up shall only be the title of my storygame, and not the RP. I have decided on the name, Born Among A Hundred, after a quote by Plato.

A hero is born among a hundred, a wise man is found among a thousand, but an accomplished one might not be found even among a hundred thousand men. -Plato

Nearly seventy years after the Quarantine event, society has made progress. Technology and medicine have improved greatly, and the Survivors and Surgers have completely melded into society. The Quarantine wall has been deconstructed and the badlands have been reformed into a greater state than they have before. The Quarantine event took many lives, and mutants have been a subject of thorough research.

The Surger serum is still on the streets, but now has degenerated into a less groundbreaking form. This new drug does under the street name, “Haste”. The effects of this substance vary, but is known to be carcinogenic, and often times gives an intense and long lasting high, while pumping the body with adrenaline, causing users to often go into an animalistic state.

Descendants of Surgers retain the physical benefits of their predecessors, like increased strength, speed, dexterity, and endurance. It is common to witness individuals openly display these traits, and allowing these people to participate in organized and competitive sports has been a subject of debate.

In an event many call “The Rift” humans have reached a sort of spiritual awareness. A handful religious groups and cults have arose from this event, preaching that an unseen substance dubbed “Dreamstuff” exists all around us, especially surrounding living things, and sentient beings. These groups practice the art of channeling this spiritual energy, and some have developed supernatural abilities of their own.

With the sudden increase of super-powered individuals, many groups have emerged using their gifts for their own dark agendas. To combat this, a man named Richard Ulrich founded the DECK program. The DECK program would serve as a public service, composed of super-powered and non-super-powered individuals alike. Those who enlisted were trained, and separated into squadrons of four. Each unit would act as a team, and server to protect the general populace from super-powered aggressors.

New genetic and spiritual anomalies emerged as time went on, granting individuals with abilities that only a short time ago, one could only imagine.

 

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Oh shit bois

Its almost here

Dicks out

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Right as I was about to edit it, you replied.

Impeccable timing, Tim. But I'm glad to see that you're exited.

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

I have not been this excited since the Purge.

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8 years ago

And, how exited where you then?

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Well, not "exited".

Excited.

Very.

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8 years ago

My mistake, Mr. Tim. I'm pretty sleepy at the moment.

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8 years ago

Welp, I've inherited the story, Voice of Reason from Fleshnblood_47. It appears to be a about a handicapped thief named Nathion who has the power of telepathy. It turns out he can only receive the mental messages being broadcasted around him, and cannot reply telepathically. He struggles with the voices he hears, and even has the chance to stop a suicide attempt. It looks like no matter what, he will meet up with other super-humans and join their cause, whatever it may be. 

He is bitter and sarcastic, and may curse the world for dealing him such an odd hand.

I'm going to say his alignment is somewhere in the neutral range. He is a thief, but will do the right thing if it appeals to him. I want to say either True Neutral or Neutral Chaotic.

This is going to be fun to work on. A nice chunk of the beginning is already there, rough and ripe for the molding. And yes, this will be added to my Born Among a Hundred universe.

Stay tuned, guys.

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8 years ago

Voice of Reason > 44 pages, 44 Links/ ? Pages

Green: A Mario Fanfic > 4 Pages, 3 Links/ ? Pages

Powered Up > 5 Pages, 4 links/ ? Pages

Quarantined: Hopeful Gloom > 2 Pages, 1 Link/ ? Pages

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If you can tell, I don't actually write much in my stories. I have done a bit of world building for the Born Among a Hundred stuff though. I've thought up a number of shells for characters, an have a hand full already filled out. I've also come up with abilities I'd like to have in the stories and a list of available aliases.

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8 years ago

Blurbs I want to write:

- Cannibalistic vigilante named "Accrete"

- Mutant family

- Superhuman named "Acrid"

- Female character named "Pethia"

- The true origin of Shift's powers

- The event that caused Plural to turn against Shift

- Superhuman named "Accord" with fusion/absorption abilities

- Nathion from Voice of Reason and a bout of mental screaming

- Nathion exploring his powers, and learning to telecommunicate

This list is subject to change and addendums.

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8 years ago

Blurb Finished: Cannibalistic Vigilante Known as "Accrete"

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The moon shone confidently over Coppice city, casting distinct shadows late into the night.

Jackson Helm roamed the streets, making his nightly patrols. He wore a thick dark gray coat, blue jeans, and black running shoes. His face was often stuck in a cold and unwelcoming expression. He was known to the people of Coppice city as Accrete, and was one of the most powerful super-humans in the state. He had amassed a bounty of abilities: superhuman strength, superhuman hearing, energy absorption, self viscosity control, and pyrokinesis. Not many people knew how he had gained these powers, and it wasn't something he wanted others to know.

What the people of Coppice city did know, is that almost every super-human Accrete defeated was never seen or heard from again. Many assumed that Accolade would kill them, but they were only partially correct.

Jackson Helm walked down the cold sidewalk. His breath formed clouds of vapor, which would dissolve into the night air. He walked past the familiar retail stores, and gave a passing glance at a sleeping homeless man. "That runt better have it." He grumbled to himself, picking up a brisk pace.

Accrete soon reached his destination, a dark public park. Squall, a young man in his twenties sat at a small picnic table, wearing a blue hooded sweatshirt. He seemed to be nervous. He was a super-human as well, and had the ability of air manipulation. He wasn't as skilled as other heroes and villains, but could lift a semi-truck with his gusts of air, and levitate by raising himself with the winds. Squall looked up, "Hey Jack." He tried to hide his fear.

"Where is it?" Accrete stepped forward, looking Squall up and down with a look of disgust.

"I don-," Squall took a deep breath. "I don't have it." He looked down at the ground.

Accrete clenched his hand into a fist. "Why not?" He asked evenly, attempting to control his anger. "Those energy cells weren't cheap. I had to take out a whole squadron of ACT soldiers to get those. You know how those guys are, Squall. They hit hard. I'm not invincible."

"I know that, it's just," Squall trailed off.

Accolade looked at Squall with a steely eye. "What?"

"I needed the money, alright?" He looked up at Accrete. "I figured that since you're so strong, you wouldn't need those energy cells as much."

Accrete lunges at Squall, grabbing his neck. "You little runt!" He throws him to the ground, and looks at the young man at his feet. "I said you needed to have the money by tonight. You dare cross me like this!" Accrete's fist burns red-hot, flames burst from his knuckles.

Squall quickly raises his arm, forcing a gust of wind to push Accrete back. "I'm sorry! I can get the money back!" Squall gets up to his feet, as Accrete rushes toward him.

"You entitled bastard, I needed that money!" Accrete flung a volley of fireballs at Squall, who countered the move by dodging the attack and raising himself up in the air. Accrete leaped into the night sky, and latched onto the young man's leg with an iron grip.

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Note: For some reason, I kept on writing Accrete as Accolade. That was annoying. Accolade is going to be the name of a separate character.

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Accrete raised the temperature of his hand, while increasing his grip on Squall. "No one gets away from me without paying the price!" He yelled, attempting to drag Squall down.

Squall was having a hard time concentrating while his leg was practically being burned off. "Damn it, Jack! I'm sorry!" Squall hovered just so Accrete was off the ground. He was doing his best to fight the pain. He knew that Accrete was going to kill him, and take his powers. He knew that much. "I can pay you back!" Squall attempted to kick his attacker off his leg, but with no avail. 

"I'm not going to let a runt like you get away with disrespecting me like this!" Accrete's clasped hand burned with a furious intensity, eating through the leg of Squall's pants. "This is the last time you're going to drop the ball on me!"

Squall screamed in pain, as Accrete's burning hand scorched his flesh, he dropped to the ground, breaking his focus. "No! Please!" He raised his arms to attempt to block the incoming blows.

Accrete literally burned with rage, as his fists met with Squall's body. His flesh was singed simply by the intense heat of his fists. The aggressor picked up the squirming young man, and held him up to his eye level. "We could have been fine. I could have taught you to gain full control of your powers. Yet, you came along and screwed it all up." Accrete's face was twisted into a grimace of complete hatred, and bloodlust.

"I'm sorry!" Tears ran down Squall's face, as he blurted out, speaking through the pain. "My family needed that money! It was the only way, Jack!" 

"I don't want to hear your little sob story!" He shook Squall, his hands still burning at an intense temperature. "You're an insignificant runt, only fit for death." Accrete clenched his teeth. "Goodbye, Squall."

"N-no! Plea-" Squall's words were interrupted as his neck was snapped, and the life was drained out of his body. Accrete grinned with dark pleasure, and threw he corpse to the ground with a sickening thump.

Accrete wasted no time, and plunged his hand into Squall's chest, and removed his heart. It was still beating, writhing weakly. The heart glowed with a soft energy, as Accrete could feel the power that was sheltered inside. He quickly bit into the bloody organ, using his teeth to rip through the tender tissues. He could feel the essence of the young man filling his body, from his ears all the way to his toes. "Yes, it is done." Accrete's grin grew wider, as he unleashed a blast of power, fueling a massive gust of wind. The gust whipped the grass around him, tearing the sod from the ground. He began to rise into the cold night sky, surrounded by an untamed whirlwind.

This was Accrete's true power. His rage, his hunger, and lust for power. He had no other agenda, other than to keep his motives secret, and to protect the civilians from those who threatened the fine city of Coppice.

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Blurbs I want to write:

- Boss getting his powers stolen, the rise of Accolade

- Boss becoming infused with a slime hivemind

- Hero/Villain with multiple personality disorder

- Mutant family

- Superhuman named "Acrid"

- Female character named "Pethia"

- The true origin of Shift's powers

- The event that caused Plural to turn against Shift

- Superhuman named "Accord" with fusion/absorption abilities

- Nathion from Voice of Reason and a bout of mental screaming

- Nathion exploring his powers, and learning to telecommunicate

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This list is subject to change and addendums.

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Nathion sat on his couch, tired from a long day of new people, experiences, and life in general. He grabbed the television remote beside him, and began to forget his troubles.? Soon, the TV became just another droning sound, as he drifted off to sleep.

A quiet voice whispered into the night, "I don't know how long I can take this. I've tried everything, but nothing seems to work. I'm just not getting through to that guy."

Nathion slowly woke up, listening to the voices in the night.

"It feels so good, please don't stop!"

Nathion attempted to avert his mind to someone else.

"I'm sorry Jack! My family needed that money! I know he's going to kill me. I've seen him tear the hearts of of those guys when he thought no one was looking. It's all over! This is it. God, ple-" The voice was cut off.

"What a runt. The kid deserved to die, whining like that."

Mental voice after voice, speech after speech, Nathion sat listening into the night.

*To Be Continued*

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

I've created a new story to procrastinate on. I'll probably have it done first, because it's the easiest for me to write.

~Adventurer for Hire~

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/creeping-whispers

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Voice of Reason -

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/voice-of-reason

Green: a Mario Fanfic -

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/green~3a-a-mario-fanfic

Powered Up -

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/powered-up

Quarantined: Hopeful Gloom -

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/quarantined~2d-hopeful-gloom

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

Here is a short blurb about Tim and Chris that I have had sitting in my notes for about a year. It has now been finished.

@Tim36D @Chris113022

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Tim and Chris: No Choking Matter

It was a beautiful morning in Cystia, and what is a beautiful morning without an equally beautiful breakfast?

Tim and Chris sat at their table, shaking off the standard morning grogginess. Tim sat down and began to read the newspaper, while nibbling on a peice of toast he had prepared earlier. Who actually knows how that was possible, as Tim did not remove his mask.

"You do know that all that stuff that's in that paper is online, right? You're just supporting the continuous onslaught of trees who were horribly slaughtered to print that." Chris says as he pours a large glass of chocolate milk, which happened to be in the fridge.

"Sure, Chris." Tim mumbles without looking up and paying attention to Chris' remark. 

Chris opens the pantry and grabs his favorite box of cereal, Chocolate Sprinkled Marshmallow Dingles and grabs a bowl from the cupboard and the milk from the fridge. He quickly pours himself a large helping and splashes a load of milk onto the cereal. Chris' mouth couldn't help but water at the sugary morning delicacy.

Tim looked up from his paper and got an eyeful of Chris' breakfast. "Chris, you're surely going to get diabetes if you that." Tim scoffed while pointing a finger of disapproval at the heaping bowl. "You're already kind of chubby."

"You have your paper, and I have my cereal." Chris replied matter-of-factly. 

"Whatever you say, man." Tim rolled his eyes.

Chris began to scarf down his breakfast, heaping spoonful after  spoonful into his gaping mouth. His beady and cartoony black dot eyes glistened as he ravenously consumed the bowl of cereal.

Tim simply shook his head at Chris' lack of etiquette.

As Tim silently read the morning paper, he began to hear Chris wheezing on the other side of the table. He slammed his fists and newspaper down onto the polished wooden table, "Dang it Chris, I told you-" Tim got an eyeful of Chris' face, more so his eyes nearly popping out of his head due to him choking on a spoonful of cereal.

Chris gasped and hissed, in a struggle to get a breath of air. His head began to shift to an angry red color. He would be asking for help, if he could speak.

Tim leaped out his seat to help his friend, and quickly began to execute the Heimlich manuver. A clod of saliva soaked cereal and marshmallow bits became dislodged from Chris' throat. Chris slumped to the floor, and wheezed. 

Tim stood over him smugly, raising his gloved finger. He was about to say something and rub the fact that Chris was a hopeless moron in his face. Chris, fully aware of this coughed and looked up with a frown. "Shut up, Tim."

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

"Tim and Chris" is filmed in front of a live studio audience.

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8 years ago

Ey.

My favorite cereal is Cinnamon Toast Crunch.

Get that shit outta here.

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8 years ago

How was I supposed to know? I started this a year ago.

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8 years ago

I know. It was a joke.

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8 years ago

cri

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8 years ago

nu cri zeg

iz gud stuf

but nu cinamn tost crnch maek nut so gud

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8 years ago

i stup cri

i kno

i habe no ideu wat u sey ta mi

Zag's Stuff

8 years ago

The first page in ~Adventurer for Hire~

Sahll folded his hands, and plastered an exaggerated smile across his face. He sat in his stand he put up on Sparce Road. The sun shone with a happy warmth, causing Sahll to sweat.

"Adventurer for hire!" He called out weakly, and his voice echoed across the dusty and lonely road. The crows in the trees behind caw, seemingly laughing at him. Sahll hangs his head. "Aw, what's it worth? I'm never going to get hired. I should have listened to Momma." Sahll grips his pike and removes it from its holster on his back. He stands and raises his pike in the middle of the road. "World! I call to you! Bring me an adventure!"

A gloomy voice calls behind him, "You find adventure, not ask for it, you dweeb."

"Wha-" Sahll is whacked in the face with a polished stick. He stumbled backwards, but does not fall over. He catches a glimpse of a black figure, and allows his vision to clear. Who are you?"

The black figure responds with a sigh, "You may call me-" The figure fumbles for a name. "Jack. You may call me Jack."

By now, Sahll's vision clears and sees Jack for himself. Jack stands only a few decameters taller than Sahll, and is in the likeness of a crow. He stands on two legs, and his wings are folded on his sides. He has a long, marred beak and two small red eyes. Atop his head is a small top hat. Jack's voce is on the brink of being monotonous, and is as loud as it needs to be.

"You're a dawman, huh?"

"As obvious that you are human."

"What kind of name is Jack, anyway?"

"It is a cherished name among my people. As of the moment, I do not trust you enough to give my real name."

"Why not?" Sahll cocked his head, and put his pike away.

"Right now, you are a simple hired hand. I see you are young, naive and foolish." Jack shakes his head subtly. "Now, I need your help. It is a simple task. A bunch of cleptimps have stolen a bag of money from me. I require your assistance in retrieving it."

"Cleptimps!" Sahll pounds his fist into his hand, "Those little pests, always swiping things that aren't theirs." Sahll face turns to a mischievous scowl.

"Yes, they are lesser beasts. It is expected." Jack states, eyeing Sahll over for the first time. Sahll is of average stature, not too short or tall. His lean and toned body will do well in defending Jack. He wore a green sleeveless shirt, showing he once had enough money to buy dyed clothing. His pants are ripped around the knees, and he stood barefoot. However, he wore a fine leather belt adorned with steel loops and holsters. His head was round and scarred, and only grew a thick strip of straight black hair. His eyes shone a curious amber. If anything, the Dawman reasoned that Sahll would grow to be a capable adventurer in the very least.

"Shall we go?" Jack asked, finished with his observation. Sahll followed, fixing a small sign that read 'Will be back soon' before leaving his stand behind.