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I'm writing a storygame about the zodiacs and I'm not quite sure how to format it. Should I have it with a health variable so you could die, or should there be no way to die, but ways to lose, or what?

Is there a pointed question here, or are you generally asking what people do? Most stories just have end links, good or bad, without a health system. If you want better advice than that, you'll have to put more effort into the question since you gave no background to your story and no context about the problem you're having.

Well, here's the summary I've written.

There is a hidden realm that watches over the mortal world. There, the embodiments of the ancient constellations reside. Recently, a mysterious force has been taking the constellations. Now, only the twelve zodiacs remain. Take the reigns of one of the twelve and try to uncover the mystery.

Ok, thank you! :)

I do a little bit at a time. Starting with Aries, I will go through the whole story from each perspective.

Oh, trust me, this'll be interesting... hehehehe *evil laugh*

Here's some more advice, you probably wouldn't have drawn attention to being an alt, if you hadn't decided to make a "goodbye forever" thread as Artsygirl.

End, what in the world makes you think that Cancer the Crab is Artsy Girl? >.<

Pardon me?

Ignore him Cancer. He's obviously mistaken. ^_^

Um, thanks? (I'm not sure how to respond to this XD)

Yeah, Artsy Girl was some random troll who recently left the site after causing choas. Really not sure why he thinks you're her. Your art style is completely different. ^_^

:)

Personally, I suspect MadHattersDaughter. The resemblance is pretty uncanny. ^_^

The blue of the stars DOES match the blue of the sunset/sunrise

Well spotted! ^_^

And I would have gotten away with it too if it weren't for you meddling kids who know your primary colors!! >:~[

XD