mrcrimsonclean, The Contributor

Member Since

5/6/2018

Last Activity

10/15/2024 7:13 PM

EXP Points

197

Post Count

371

Storygame Count

1

Duel Stats

0 wins / 2 losses

Order

Warden of Avon

Commendations

21

go read in moonlit waters, its good :)

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points

Storygames

Anya's choice

Setting is WW2, your partner has went off to war, Your only communication is through letters. This is a very short story.

 


Monster+Hunter
unpublished , coauthor

In "Monster Hunter," you step into the boots of a seasoned hunter tasked with tracking down and defeating legendary creatures that have plagued villages and cities for centuries.

This game is a thrilling mix of action, suspense, and strategy. Each decision you make will impact your journey, from choosing your weapons and allies to deciding whether to confront or avoid certain monsters.

The game is serious and intense, with a dark atmosphere that pulls you into a world where danger lurks in every shadow.

You'll need to think quickly and strategically to survive as you encounter fierce beasts, cunning rivals, and mysterious characters.

Your choices will shape your path in this high-stakes adventure.

 

 

 


Recent Posts

Sherbet's Summer's End Synergy Contest on 10/15/2024 4:14:59 PM

I will never start. Ill just make up for my lack of participation`with indepth reviews instead. 


VooDew 6.0 on 10/15/2024 2:27:04 PM

Yeah, coke can definitely make my teeth feel super gritty. 


Respect for the Writing on 10/15/2024 9:29:25 AM

Robotic intellect maybe. Truly a philosopher, very well articulated. 


Thunderdome 15: Darius vs Benholman! on 10/15/2024 4:39:48 AM

I vote for story A. I'm probably just retarded and will re read story B later but I struggled to understand what was going on at times. At the end of the day stories are about Entertainment, so even if story A had more grammatical issues I found myself more engaged with and enjoying A more, really liked the ending. Usually it doesn't happen that way but it does sometimes. 

Story A feels like it flows much better, a lot of story B could have much of its word count took out such as with the flashbacks and it wouldn't actually change the story very much. With story A if you took a lot of things out it would feel like it has random cuts, jumps and abrupt scene changes. That leads story A into having more weight for me, since half of story b can seem like filler that isn't necessary information for the story to be told (based on the prompt given). 


Respect for the Writing on 10/15/2024 4:06:50 AM

You're truly timeless in mind mizal.  Gonna have to change my pfp now after you said that though. Can't be caught giving off tranny vibes. 


Respect for the Writing on 10/15/2024 3:58:57 AM

I'd reccomend some breathing exercises and mindful meditation. They will become useful tools in your arsenal going forward. 

Seriously though, I don't think the things people say here are that deep, it's good that we can feel like we don't have to censor ourself or be in fear of constant judgement for any language mishap here, at least if you're actually growing and improving on criticism (as harsh as it is sometimes). 

 


VooDew 6.0 on 10/14/2024 6:01:39 PM

lol 

yeah, maybe americans just go tongue blind to it, like mizal said, they just got used to that taste.


storygame suggestions on 10/14/2024 5:56:29 PM

i finished and reviewed it. Bill really needs to change the difficulty rating, 3/8 my ass, that game is a 5/8 at least. Even decisions which were pefectly logical were largely unknown in how they would unfold, truly a storygame that felt impossible to predict the outcome of, good story!


VooDew 6.0 on 10/14/2024 5:36:45 PM

I'll have to taste them myself in America one day to let you know why. My Dad isnt one to go indepth on why its worse, when i ask him he will just say it tastes like plastic lol


VooDew 6.0 on 10/14/2024 3:04:48 PM

I wonder if the American counterparts are the same as the British version though. I do know that even if the branding and packaging is the same they do sometimes change things. I remember watching a video of Americans tasting British candy and snacks and they said that the British dorito has a more tortilla feel to it as opposed to the American version, skittles is another good one, I know that the American skittles don't have a blackcurrant flavour due to some law surrounding some kind of tree disease, while the British ones do.