Avery_Moore, The Master Scrivener

Member Since

1/8/2019

Last Activity

12/25/2025 4:56 AM

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3,382

Post Count

4544

Storygame Count

1

Duel Stats

223 wins / 98 losses

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Marauder Exemplar

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225

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points Earning 500 Points Earning 1,000 Points Earning 2,000 Points Made Price of Freedom. A story-game so good that others can only hope to poorly imitate it. Oh, and being a staple wholesome site member. Has an underrated verbal sharp tongue! Hides it with "^_^" Having 1 Storygame(s) Featured Won 70% of Duels Given by BerkaZerka on 04/07/2019 - ^v^ Given by EndMaster on 04/26/2019 - For defeating the CoGite Tyrant in personal battle to gain your FREEDOM! Given by march5th00 on 05/17/2025 - don't make a part two.  just complete the story.  one of the most engaging stories i've seen on the site. Given by Will11 on 02/18/2020 - For being such a brilliant author and wonderful presence on the site :D

Storygames

Featured Story The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost

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You are ten years old when you first feel the weight of shackles around your wrists. In a matter of hours, your whole world is turned upside down as you and your brother are dragged away from your home in Greece to work as slaves in the Roman Empire. Now you must struggle for survival. Every decision you make will affect your future. Your life, the life of your brother and the lives of your friends are in your hands.

Begin your journey as a child, and make heartbreaking choices that will shape the adult you will become. But be careful. An act of kindness might come back to haunt you, and a thoughtless word could earn you some powerful enemies. A split second decision will determine who lives and who dies. Will you sell your soul to win your freedom, or sacrifice everything for the people you love? Will you even live long enough to see the sun rise?

Special thanks to all of my beta-testers: TinyOnion, Morgan R, Mewsly, Evan Dean Nathanael, Laha, Cookiemonsta, Jumo, Hannah Minger, Danielle L-S, eXwhYZee, Umbreonpanda, M.S.X.K. Laird, Likho and N1GHTMAR3.

And a really, REALLY special thanks to my patreons: Chanbot, Mizal, Ryan Esher and SpartacustheGreat.

You can also keep up to date on my games by following me on social media at:
https://www.facebook.com/AveryMooreGames
https://twitter.com/Avery__Moore


Gotta Catch Em All
unpublished

Pokemon game for playing around with variables and stuff


Gotta Catch Em All (Original)
unpublished

Pokemon game for playing around with variables and stuff


Murder at the Manor
unpublished

Four mysteries in one. A man has been murdered in his stately home in the country, and you have only four suspects. Can you figure out who the killer is? It could be anyone... Literally. Because the killer is chosen at random at the beginning of every game.

Note: This game was originally made for a competition put together by Morgan R, where writers had to make the best game they could in a day. Unfortunately, I didn't get the game finished in time, so never got around to publishing it, but I stumbled across it a few years later and decided it was worth finishing. So here it is, hope you enjoy ^_^

 

A massive special thanks to all of my patreons:

Chanbot, Mizal, Ryan Esher, Turnip Bandit, Ninjapitka, John Oester, Pyrola and Cjjolly

 

All of my games are free to play, but you can support me on patreon at:

https://www.patreon.com/Avery_Moore

 

You can also keep up to date on my games by following me on social media at:

https://www.facebook.com/AveryMooreGames

https://twitter.com/Avery__Moore


The Lawless Ones
unpublished

This game has lots of stuff.


The Price of Freedom: Brothers in Arms
unpublished

A massive special thanks to all of my patreons:

Chanbot, Mizal, Ryan Esher, Turnip Bandit, Ninjapitka, John Oester, Pyrola and Cjjolly

 

All of my games are free to play, but you can support me on patreon at:

https://www.patreon.com/Avery_Moore

 

You can also keep up to date on my games by following me on social media at:

https://www.facebook.com/AveryMooreGames

https://twitter.com/Avery__Moore


Recent Posts

List 2 books, one you love and one you hate. on 12/24/2025 5:22:27 PM

Wrong! Absolutely loved Lolita! Couldn't stand Catcher in the Rye.

Holden Caulfield is easily one of the most hateable protagonists I have ever come across. He is a whiny little bitch bag who constantly complains that everybody else is a "fake" and a "phony" whilst at the same time being easily the phoniest person in the book. Pretending to like a girl he hates in an attempt to get in her pants, asking her to run away with him, blowing a gasket when she says no, and then admitting that he wouldn't have actually run away with her even if she said yes. Also he looks down on literally anybody who watches movies in any capacity because books are better.

Now, Humbert Humbert is, of course, also a hateable protagonist. I mean, the dude is just a straight up pedophile and murderer. You can't really get much more hateable than that. The difference is that the reader is very clearly supposed to hate Humbert Humbert.

Its like the difference between Bella Swan and Joffery Baratheon. They are both very hateable characters, but in Game of Thrones, the readers are supposed to hate Joffery and take some kind of twisted enjoyment in how much they hate him. In Twilight, the reader is supposed to relate to and empathize with Bella and view her as a heroine, so the fact that she is so hateable is a massive failure on the part of the author.

Maybe I might have related to Holden Caulfield if I had read the book when I was an angsty teenager, but I read it as an adult, and as such found the character completely insufferable. Maybe there is something else I could have taken away from the book. The writing was certainly good. But considering the focus of the book is on Holden's internal mental struggles, and I could not relate to or sympathize with his mental struggles since the majority of his issues seem to stem from his own delusions and biases rather then any actual problems in his life, I just couldn't get on board with it.

Now, from what I understand, a lot of people hate Lolita and think the book is disgusting because it is trying to get people to empathize with and feel sorry for a pedophile... I did not get that impression at all. Throughout the novel, Humbert Humbert is very clearly the villain and I never once felt that the author intended him to be seen as a tragic hero. He's a really bad guy. I mean, even outside of being a pedophile, he's a terrible, terrible guy. Dude is actually worse in the books than he is in the movies. He had a first wife before he married Lolita's mother that he treated like absolute shit. Obviously he treated Lolita's mother like absolute shit and (due to the whole unreliable narrator thing) may or may not have murdered her. Through his actions in the book, it is made very clear that he is not in love with Lolita and is just using her to fulfill his sick fantasies. There is absolutely nothing redeemable about this character.

Now, I guess I can see how some people would think that this novel is trying to get you to relate to and sympathize with the protagonist. Because, of course, the novel is told in first person. The character of Humbert Humbert very clearly IS trying to get the reader to sympathize and relate to him. That said, I do not think this was the author's intention because, if the author wanted us to relate to Humbert Humbert, I think he would have made him a less despisable character. Dude is literally pure evil, which I think makes him a really interesting protagonist... Plus the book is fantastically written, so there's that. ^_^


Merry Christmas Eve! on 12/24/2025 4:11:28 PM

My name is not Merry, but it is Christmas Eve!


Merry Christmas Eve! on 12/24/2025 3:23:00 PM

My name is not Eve, but Merry Christmas to you too! ^_^


List 2 books, one you love and one you hate. on 12/23/2025 10:30:03 AM

Never read either of the first set, so I'm skipping that one.

For the second set, I'm going to guess that they forced you to do Hamlet for your school play, where they stuck you in a potato sack and a pair of tights and you had to recite hours worth of ye olde English without having the slightest clue what the words actually meant and then one of the other kids beat you senseless with a wooden sword in the final act and it traumatized you for life.


List 2 books, one you love and one you hate. on 12/23/2025 7:02:39 AM

Considering Fourth Wing is generally considered to be one of the greatest piles of steaming horse shite to be published since 50 Shades of Grey, I'm going to take a wild gander and guess that you hated it... If you loved it, prepare to be mocked into oblivion! ^_^


List 2 books, one you love and one you hate. on 12/23/2025 6:33:41 AM

You're weird. Name of the Wind was awesome! ^_^


List 2 books, one you love and one you hate. on 12/23/2025 6:30:14 AM

Oh! This is fun! Okay, I see your cringey romances and I raise you... Catcher in the Rye and Lolita!

Am I an angsty little bitch or a pedophile? Debate! ^_^


List 2 books, one you love and one you hate. on 12/23/2025 6:23:53 AM

I'm going to go against the grain and say you love Wuthering Heights and hate Pride and Prejudice. Wuthering Heights is a fucking awesome novel and Pride and Prejudice, while not terrible, is a pretty meh in comparison.


I Will Draw For You on 12/18/2025 3:44:13 PM

I could only find 4. (If anybody is aware of the existence of any others that I might have forgotten, please let me know! You can never have too many chibi Hitlers.) ^_^


I Will Draw For You on 12/18/2025 3:14:34 PM

Pity I've got them all saved on my other computer. Will have a browse and see if I can find them. ^_^