A Day in the Life (and death) of you.

Completely illogical. So many of the situations were completely random, such as a spider being the size of a golden retriever? And, like Wizzy said, how can you go to work OR go to school? You just skip one? That makes no sense.

The writing wasn't very good, sorry, but there seemed to be a lot of detail in some spots and almost none in other spots. This makes it seem rushed and uneven, and overall, poor in quality.

It's very boring, and I kinda wanted to exit the window the entire time. I had no idea what the hell was going on, the branching was poorly executed, and the writing is incredibly linear.

The deaths were the most linear and random part of this whole thing. They make no sense, and are probably the least likely things to ever happen in real life.

1/8.

Awful. So random. I.D.K. what is going on in this story. And REALLY, a spider the size of golden retriever, REALLY (C (grade) for effort/or lack there of)!!!

Many situations are very confusing in this story. First, you don’t let any tension build up, it’s just, if you pick something wrong then you die. Secondly, the deaths are completely random and overused, I mean seriously. Spiders the size of golden retrievers? Really? Thirdly, Illogical. It just doesn’t make sense; why would I go to both work and school? And if I go to work, why am I still living at my mom’s house? And if a clown is staring at me when I’m in the bath, why wouldn’t I do anything and completely ignore it?

Would not recommend. 2/8

BORING

mundane and overall decent

how did i get two burning endings in a row

lovely deaths. However all of the options lead back to all the other options.

I lived! Yay, I think.

Kind of boring. And random. Why is there a clown in the bathroom? And why do you just go ahead and bathe, despite being stared at by a clown? A lot of the pages lack much in the way of details or character development. I really just read through out of curiosity to see how many ways I could die.

great