Player Comments on A Day in the Life (and death) of you.
Completely illogical. So many of the situations were completely random, such as a spider being the size of a golden retriever? And, like Wizzy said, how can you go to work OR go to school? You just skip one? That makes no sense.
The writing wasn't very good, sorry, but there seemed to be a lot of detail in some spots and almost none in other spots. This makes it seem rushed and uneven, and overall, poor in quality.
It's very boring, and I kinda wanted to exit the window the entire time. I had no idea what the hell was going on, the branching was poorly executed, and the writing is incredibly linear.
The deaths were the most linear and random part of this whole thing. They make no sense, and are probably the least likely things to ever happen in real life.
on 3/27/2017 7:41:27 PM with a score of 0
I like this story :D The part where you said: "The leaves litter the ground" It was really descriptive and I liked that. Keep up the good work!
on 9/4/2020 9:50:26 PM with a score of 0
This was a really good story. I loved it. Thanks for making it. It was great. It is definitely worth everyone's time
-- Abby bird on 7/10/2020 6:58:47 PM with a score of 0
Super fun while stuck inside gonna play again to see how I die the second time. Thanks for the fun
-- Farrells on 4/3/2020 11:00:38 PM with a score of 0
Grossed out everybodies. Garlic Bread enjoyed it. You have scarred him for life. THX XOXOXOXOXOxoxoxoxoxoxox ;o
-- Richard 'Horndog' Cranium on 11/7/2019 5:06:08 PM with a score of 0
Died #9 all endings done
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on 9/12/2019 4:05:54 PM with a score of 0
So boring, nothing scary happened
on 6/25/2019 3:37:10 PM with a score of 0
i like having ma burritos,nuice an warm
-- Gl1tch G1rl on 3/22/2019 1:57:54 PM with a score of 0
That was a short story, I died in the basement while getting my mac and cheese.
-- Jaiden James Samples on 3/17/2019 8:56:04 PM with a score of 0
on 1/26/2019 6:07:09 AM with a score of 0
this was weird
on 1/7/2019 1:43:17 PM with a score of 0
I can't tell if this was supposed to be some weird "ironic" horror story. Probably not though. 3/8.
on 7/20/2018 8:29:23 AM with a score of 0
It's so random and you basically can't win, you can only die.
on 11/9/2017 6:13:50 AM with a score of 0
i thought it was better than reese pieces by far
-- Kaylee Early on 5/22/2017 4:43:40 PM with a score of 0
on 4/6/2017 10:52:42 PM with a score of 0
This story is rather boring, and doesn't make any sense. You can go to school or go to work? That doesn't make any sense. How can a child go to work, or how can an adult go to school?
Otherwise it's random and quite boring. Run around, get eaten by spiders, or nothing happens.
on 2/15/2017 1:21:34 PM with a score of 0
So, I guess death is inevitable if you go outside in this game. I decided to stick around with the gunman, he's a lousy shot, but I fell to my death.
I don't remember you specifying that the restaurant I was in was thirty stories up, but what was written was decent. I'd like to see what you could do with a longer story and an actual plot.
on 2/15/2017 11:23:51 AM with a score of 0
I'm not sure what the purpose is. I don't feel challenged at all.
on 12/21/2016 1:58:31 AM with a score of 0
Just break a window :(
on 7/23/2016 12:21:35 PM with a score of 0
Haha, I loved it! Totally 8. I didnt die tho..O_o
on 1/29/2016 2:45:51 AM with a score of 0
Just like life, it ends in death. Those spiders though.
on 11/12/2015 3:44:09 AM with a score of 0
... ALL I GOT TO DO WAS WATCH NETFLIX
-- me on 9/10/2015 7:52:17 PM with a score of 0
Netflix marathon and burritos :D :D :D
on 7/5/2015 12:30:44 PM with a score of 0
Every ending is death.
The deaths are also somewhat illogical.
on 5/10/2015 8:58:47 AM with a score of 0
on 2/25/2015 9:22:35 AM with a score of 0
I hope most of these comments are riddled with sarcasm. This story sucked.
-- kramerica on 2/25/2015 7:31:51 AM with a score of 0
pretty good. :)
-- Scearas on 11/27/2014 9:03:01 AM with a score of 0
Short, but pretty good.
on 11/8/2014 8:15:42 PM with a score of 0
Very good writing but I would have enjoyed a longer story :) Good sense of humour in the writing :D
on 11/6/2014 11:21:25 PM with a score of 0
Prune-like is my favourite state of being
on 10/29/2014 5:39:25 PM with a score of 0
I think I'm most offended by the fact that I only had 83 cents in my pocket when I died... But I likey the story:))))
on 10/29/2014 5:14:52 PM with a score of 0
Oh my goodness it just gets better and better
on 10/29/2014 4:53:56 PM with a score of 0
Oh my goodness this is actually so scary. You are the best author in the whole world
on 10/29/2014 4:47:41 PM with a score of 0