Alone In The Ball Pit

That was dreadful. If people don't go to the counter, they are stuck in The Tubes. Also, how come the cops are there for some random reason? Surely they would catch you when the nine moms come to attack you. This needs more work. 2/8

Who wouldn't want a kleptomaniac sociopath hobo as their main character? :) Too many broken links make the game too much of a head ache.

So... I shot little kids' moms with bouncy balls. Now my arm hurts from moving it too much, ow...

This was a very funny idea with, as far as I could see, working links.

Sadly it was very very short with little description and few real options.

Try making it longer, putting more text on each page and describing things in more detail. You do seem to have a grasp of the basic functions of the advanced editor so maybe work on a longer story using it.

intersting...

this is a disgrace to choose your adventure stories.

... Not very interesting, not very long, nothing unique. =|

Fun Game but very odd!:/

Well... That was strange. Funnily enough, I found the idea of a hobo playing by himself in a ball pit quite funny, but the idea was funnier than the actual game itself.
Also I read "Look out for Alone in the Ball Pit 2" ... Does this game really warrant a sequel? :p

Awful once again. I cannot be bothered to post a positive comment.