A mysterious, twisted version of a war with mechanics.

WARNING: THIS STORY CONTAINS GRAPHIC WAR VIOLENCE AND ONE USE OF VERY STRONG LANGUAGE.

Brody is a soldier who joined the Alliance Of CAC (Cunning Alliance Comrades). He has recently become an admiral and team leader of the CAC. You are Brody, you must guide your crew to (If you are lucky) Success. But, if you are the more unfortunate sort, you will die.

Good Luck Sir!

Okay, thank you.

You don't dodge the knife per say, you sort of duck to avoid it. You do ability of the rest of your body though.

It's set in around 2077, so pretty sci-fi, with a modern twist

Here's a story I'm starting to write, hope you guys enjoy it, and please give feedback!
 

"Urgh..." you mumble. The sound of the heart radar next to your hospital bed is beeping extraordinarily loud. "Where am..." the sound of your voice is cut off by the nurse. "Be quiet! Your pain shall only get worse if you chat. Keep quiet!" You have no choice but to obey the nurse's commands. If only you had your left hand back, it would be easy to punch that wanker in the face! Somehow, the nurse seems to be some sort of mind-reading gypsy. "That's it!" The nurse says, before picking up a knife and about to jab it into your lower intestines. You dodge the knife before quickly reacting and by using your right arm, and thrusting up all your weight. You finally manage to release your body from the bed. Everything is fuzzy. It feels like you need to visit the optician, but you don't. You look at the digital clock beside you and mumble. As you climb slowly out of your bed, the sound of mumbling patients and babies crying is like 20,000 decibels of hell.

So are we accepting or declining my idea?

Well Ford, here's an example.

Forum Thread Name: "I AM SEXY AND I OBLIVIATE YOUR GALAXY"

Then either a mod would delete it, or if you feel guilty for posting it, you could delete it.

If you have posted a thread which once you have posted you think "On Second Thoughts, I don't want this thread here." You could click the delete button and it would delete the thread.

Hah, don't worry. My associates keep the handkerchief 100% 24/7 Guarded.

Isn't it a little bit strange to say your Hello Post in someone else's Hello Post?

Man, what the hell am I saying? My manners aren't with me today.

Woah! That truly is a good piece of writing! If people advise me not to read something, I have to read it.

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http://chooseyourstory.com/story/hell-girl~3a-the-shattered-mirror

The fucking options presented did not satisfy the anger you made me feel whilst playing this game. I'm going to go decapitate an old man now. Fuck you.
6/8

-- Coffee on 5/24/2014 8:40:40 PM with a score of 0

i got mad and set her to hell after my first failed game.paybacks a bitch.

-- Tristan on 4/9/2014 1:52:37 PM with a score of 0

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/through-time

swag

-- cuzzie on 6/1/2014 5:22:05 PM with a score of 97530

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/survive-the-zombies

not as long as i'd like it to be

-- populouspoptart on 6/16/2014 11:41:49 PM with a score of 8000

Yay

-- Rolf on 5/31/2014 12:47:23 PM with a score of -666

-sigh- don't threaten people

-- keirebu on 3/17/2014 1:35:48 AM with a score of -666

I had the "decent" ending, and 2 achivements, No-one left behind, and best friends.

-- EarthCollision on 3/5/2014 2:16:18 PM with a score of 200

Sex: Yes Please

-- MidkiffCboy on 2/23/2014 5:58:51 PM with a score of -666

I'm not sure I even understand the plot of this storygame...

4/8

-- ShriekingTiger44 on 2/6/2014 2:50:02 AM with a score of -666

not bad i have played better

-- dfyf on 1/12/2014 6:33:47 AM

sorry bob...

-- DmitriSteiner on 12/22/2013 9:22:57 AM with a score of 200

this suxs

-- hi on 6/28/2013 9:37:24 AM with a score of -666