Anything for Momma

It was alright, I suppose.

Some of the choices were a bit annoying, because they weren't choices. For example, there was the option to "seek out gang members," but then, the narrator simply gives me a one sentence explanation saying why I shouldn't choose this, and makes me choose the other choice. That's not a choice, and it should not be there because it is very pointless.

There was enough detail for me to understand what was going on, but the amount of writing in general could have been larger, especially because of the not-so-big amount of pages.

There were some points when more detail would have been nice, such as the death of the mother. You really should have expanded more on that event, because i'm curious about it and it would have been great for character development.

A few spelling errors here and there, but nothing critical.

Also, what the hell is wrong with the main character? He wants to get revenge on the gang that killed his mother to protect his baby sister? Yeah, because i'm sure a gang it going to target one specific baby. And wouldn't going after them just GET his sister hurt? Some parts of the story were quite illogical.

3/8.

Not bad. Some spelling and grammar issues here and there, and rather short. The descriptions were generally alright, but it would be better to show us how the characters are feeling rather than simply tell us. The mother's shooting, which sets off the whole story, is never described; it'd be the perfect opportunity to get some emotion in here, but it's summed up in a sentence.

This is an above-average story, but not a stupendous one. Excellent for a first try, though.

... i DON'T KNOW

Very graphic, you kill troy in front on his daughter

Needs more detail put into it.

As I went through this story I was amazingly bored until I hit the fabulous choice to stab Mr. Bad Guy in front of his daughter. Right there and then I knew this game was for me, I stabbed him in front of his daughter, most likely in his foot, then he died. The daughter cried VERY emotional cries then I left to another state. 9/11 I would fantasize about murdering in front of children again.

It is an okay game, certainly helps with the experience points if anything, not bad but could be longer, and it sounds like a Mommy clone. Just saying.

Meh. It was okay but I didn't really get into the story and enjoy it.

i dont understand how to win

Verry nice game. I managed to get through this one.