Destroy Super Team Strike Force

Well. The amount of dead links was quite annoying. Also, try to make it more obvious when you're supposed to use the items you get, because that really ticked me off when I had to go back and see what I was supposed to do to get to the end.

While the spelling is pretty bad and the grammar and capitalization was lacking, the story was... kinda (?) interesting. If it was more developed, it would be better. The actual story wasn't actually completed, and that was a bit disappointing.

While the tag says, "Humor." I say, "Nada, mi amigo/a."

The storygame has potential, I can tell you that. Just keep improving, and you'll get better ratings. :)

This game was interesting to say the least. At the beginning, I wasn't too impressed by the poor writing and the lack of links, but it slowly picked up. It was kind of funny in a weird way, and the funniest line was:

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"we'll be waiting for you unarmed at the airpoert." Even if it was misspelled, it was hilarious.

This was no masterpiece, and it really could have done with more in-depth writing with better descriptions, background info, character development and plot. But it wasn't the worst storygame ever and showed some promise.

What? I didn't really like this story at all. Not coherent, and I skipped over half the dialogue. You might wanna fix that. This has the potential to be a good story, disturbing subject matter aside. You just made it so your story didn't make much sense, and not in a good way. Plot and character development needs work. Also, allow people to end the game prematurely if they want to. People don't have to get the "final" ending to leave a valid opinion. 2/8

Uhh... Is it just me or was this game just the teeniest, tiniest, iddy biddiest bit racist? No? Just me then. :p

This is one of the few games that I have given a one. It was just bad. It was confusing, didn't make any sense in any shape or form, and it really didn't have a plot. But what really made me not like this game was that there was only one end game link. I don't like it when I die and I don't have the chance to comment and rate.

This could really use some work.

1/8

Finally finished it

Gave it a 4. Lots of spelling errors, not a whole lot of effort in general. It looks like you made this an hour, maybe less. I recommend adding more details, and effort your story. It had the potential to be awesome...

Finally! That was sort of interesting... Although all of chocobot's REAL games are much better

WoW!

Pretty bad.

Dumb. Idiotic. Stupid. Not cool. The end.