Draconic Warrior

Nice text but linkage needed definant work.

Rommel's got a point. The dead links are starting to irritate me a bit. Fix them and this game will work out well.

would be ok if you fixed up the dead links. 4/8.

it was boring cause i kept gettin killed but finnally i got through I give it a short but sweet

Where are the links?!

too many dead links!

Half of the pages don't even go anywhere. Not very well done.

ng how "funny" this game's atmosphere is! Man, this was a CRAPPY game. You could have made it so much better. Unpublish it and restart this game, and actually FINISH it!
This game had some potential, but you betrayed me and many others. It needs to be redone. Plus, don't make the atmsophere as "funny" make it serious, like it should be.

Too linear, too short, and most of all...
NOT FREAKING DONE!!
God, FINISH your games! There were more "This is a New Page" links than links that took you through the story. Which isn't saying much, but whatever. Plus, what kind of wife is your (in general) wife? He kills you with a sword because of some heresay about you and this Jen character. WHO IS JEN?!!? If that was supposed to be funny, it wasn't! Plus, the story was just stupid. And at the mess hall, what difference does it make if you sit or stand while eating the pastry? YOU STILL SCARF IT! And I thought you said Elves were WISE AND FAIR, not WEAK AND UNTRUSTWORTHY! And how come an Elvan Dragonrider can't take some weakling Orcs? And how do they talk so sassily and intelligently?! They'd say, like "Get fat elf!" not "Get the fat one with the spatula!" and besides, the elf with the spatula could hit them with hot tongs, consideri

Far too many dead links to be enjoyable. Dead links even at beginning. Story is formulaic and derivative. Somewhat fun.