Eyes Of An Angle

A sci-fi storygame by BILLY

Player Rating2.45/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 63 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"Walk in the park"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level2/8

"Choking hazard for children under 4"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

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It might have been the many broken links, my co-pilot's thick Australian accent or the re-rendering of the English language into unfamiliar words such as piolet for pilot but at no point in that story game did I have a clear idea of who I was, what I was doing or why, despite the many drawings which included one of a pink haired girl who, though she didn't clarify the situation any,was at least nice to look at. Not many authors illustrate their own stories so you get extra points for that but despite reading this for at least 15 minutes if anyone asked me what it was about all I could tell them would be "space" before launching into a detailed description about the pretty girl with pink hair :)

— Will11 on 1/15/2015 11:54:22 PM with a score of 0

This game had a really nice plot and cool drawings.
Unfortunately, those were pretty much its only appealing features.
I would suggest that the author run this whole game through some sort of spellchecker, because literally every page is riddled with misspellings and grammatical errors. (e.g. I think it's "Eyes of an Angel", not "Angle". lol.)
Secondly, several of the pages are dead ends, so this story has not been completed yet.
In addition, there are a few points at which there is no choice of what to do. This means that there are several links but they all lead to the same page. What is the point of that?

Sorry, but this game isn't really worth playing unless you are willing to sift through incomprehensible pages of text, or if you just want the free point.

— vladimir262 on 6/21/2013 11:35:28 AM with a score of 500

This is one of the many stories on the site where there is some basic creativity, but the author is either unwilling, or unable to correct basic spelling and grammar. The pictures are obviously from MS Paint, but took time to create, so I'll add 1 to my rating. Just spellcheck and edit this. There is absolutely no excuse to have such hackneyed writing.

— madglee on 9/3/2006 11:45:42 PM with a score of 500

Needs proof reading from a fluent English speaker, and needs to be elaborated upon.

— Isshyyyji on 10/14/2015 11:13:23 PM with a score of 500

I liked the story for sure, and I definitely liked how you made the Microsoft Paint art look good, it's obvious that you put some time into it. This story is a classic example of an unwilling author, though. Just fix the basic stuff. Grammar, spelling, etc... Otherwise, good job!

— Mtactical on 1/12/2015 8:51:23 AM with a score of 0

... In a word: ugly.

— Kiel_Farren on 10/23/2014 2:36:19 PM with a score of 0

I can see you put a lot of effort into this but I just wasn't feeling it. Sorry.

Eyes Of An Angle

Player Rating2.45/8

Story Difficulty2/8

Play Length4/8

Maturity Level2/8

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