Fruit Tale

A modern storygame by Grape

Player Rating2.80/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 49 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"Need to be accompanied by an adult"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Player Comments

It was less stupid than I thought it would be. I really liked the concept, oddly enough, but it was way too short to go anywhere interesting. I wanted more characterisation. Surely a pineapple would act/talk different than an orange would.

— Gower on 4/27/2019 9:33:18 AM with a score of 0

Guerrilla warfare, vegan style...

— The_Broken_God on 4/18/2019 2:02:54 PM with a score of 0

What just happened?

— StandingWind on 4/20/2018 9:47:34 AM with a score of 0

What did I just read?

— AzBaz on 7/17/2017 6:51:22 AM with a score of 0

so no matter what you get blown up. cool.

— dream on 3/7/2017 9:59:33 PM with a score of 0

The story reminds me of the movie "Saussage Party" although more mediocre in length and quality. Too many fruit characters are introduced and you can't really get a grip on who the main character is. Except for watermelon. It definitely needs work.

— AppDude27 on 2/28/2017 10:13:40 AM with a score of 0

This was fun to play through, though it was really silly. World domination by fruit!

— Saika on 2/23/2017 5:31:19 AM with a score of 0

question: do you by any chance love fruit? all I have to say about this is dot dot dot

— annaisawesome on 2/21/2017 7:43:49 PM with a score of 0

The grammar and spelling is the only good part of this story. I'd say the concept is good, but it is unoriginal. You stole the concept from Sausage Party. It is also too rushed. There is nothing here to make me feel anything towards the fruit, other than the urge to take a sledge to them. The characters have no depth outside of being fruit. Also I know nothing about the setting. All you say is, "some guy's house." That could be a one story, one bedroom house, or it could be a mansion. Also like the anonymous guy said, the names are uninventive. You obviously put no effort what so ever into this story. I'd suggest you unpublish this and then work on it some more.

— DaCaRi on 2/18/2017 4:43:37 AM with a score of 0

This was an interesting concept, reasonably well written and with a few choices, humorous characters and situations to make it readable - the extremely short length is a major factor that will affect it's ratings but to be honest it's impressive the concept was turned into an interesting story of any length at all and I guess it went as far as it could go. I think it'd be interesting to see more from this author in the future as there are some nice ideas and humour here as long as it doesn't verge into the silly=funny area or mutual self-congratulation of alts or something :) 4/8

— Will11 on 2/18/2017 4:38:48 AM with a score of 0

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Fruit Tale

Player Rating2.80/8

Story Difficulty4/8

Play Length2/8

Maturity Level4/8

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