Hell Girl: The Shattered Mirror

I have not seen the anime but this sort of story is timeless, it has been told all over the world in different forms. This was an excellent version with perfect writing, good use of pictures and probably the most effective use of the item option I've seen in a story game. I don't like fan fics a great deal as they are based on plagiarising to a lesser or greater extent but with a classical story like this it is not so much the idea as the execution that counts and this flowed together perfectly in story-game form, if a touch too linear in one or two places (info from 3 or 4 pages could probably have been condensed into 1 without any effect on the story-game overall)

As a fan of the series, this was quite a fun story. Reminded me of the first season. I think it would have been better if some of the pages were more consolidated. Overall this was a solid experience overall. Good job

I thought that in this story, the type of theme it had was pretty cool.

Pushed that bitch into the street, fuck her.

Also, the ending where you just endure it all sent shivers up my spine. I realize now you didn't quite mean what I imagined, but it still made me feel stuff, and as someone that's dead on the inside that's all I really want out of a story game.

Nice one, if a bit short.

interesting

It's better than expected!

Wow!

The ending in which you don't use the doll is indeed quite better than the other ones! A story that can make you irritated, but rewards your patience.

I love anime and underage girls that are really 1000 so its legal

It’s ok not the best need more options!