Island Attack: Raid

A sci-fi storygame by betaband

Player Rating3.30/8

"#735 overall, #53 for 2012"

Based on 143 ratings since 07/14/2012
Played 1,278 times (finished 142)

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level5/8

"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"

Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Player Comments

Kudos for working with variables and publishing a story within your first three days as a member. You seem to understand the basics of what makes a storygame good, which does show. However, the "You Died" pages appear without any explanation of why. This seems to be a result of inexperience with the system. If you revise and proofread your future stories, as well as fiddle a bit more with the system, your story-games might turn out to be pretty good! For now, however, it is only mildly enjoyable, and could use serious work.

— Doodled on 2/23/2012 8:37:47 PM with a score of 0

I just got recommended this community by a friend. I just got my account. I'm a vetted writer but green to this site and this is pretty much sums up what this site is about for me. I see this is 9 years old but good work.

— JadeGreen17 on 5/30/2021 12:58:10 AM with a score of 0

Nice quick fun. Loved the bird. You might want to fix "here an alarm go off" on "Go Right" and "the helicopter shoot all the guards" on the final page.

— Northwind on 6/16/2020 2:54:31 AM with a score of 0

I won!! I won I won I won, and with 14 health left!!!

— Hi on 2/16/2020 6:01:16 PM with a score of 0

Too short and has no plot...

— AUAKSA on 5/17/2018 9:51:20 PM with a score of 0

yaboi said ok its pretty good man :)

— yaboi Jeff on 2/4/2018 5:11:55 PM with a score of 0

Fun but short.

— crusader on 6/25/2016 2:54:09 PM with a score of 0

Death pays for death.

— walker. on 5/26/2016 12:47:15 AM with a score of 0

Short but should definitely get a 7 or 8. There should be more like this.

— Dabosscreeper on 4/1/2016 1:25:54 AM with a score of 0

Certainly not bad, but pretty short. There needs to be more storygames like this.

— TheMonitor on 7/15/2015 4:28:40 PM with a score of 0

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Island Attack: Raid

Player Rating3.30/8

Story Difficulty4/8

Play Length2/8

Maturity Level5/8

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