Luigi's Adventure

A fan fiction storygame by Charlieschuy

Player Rating2.94/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 161 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"Walk in the park"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level1/8

"Appropriate for all ages"

Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

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bad as can be bad

— bad on 9/8/2015 12:44:38 PM with a score of 0

The events were happening in a blink of an eye, this was short, linear, and choppy, the dialogue was written out like a play instead of a story, and some of the choice's outcomes made really no sense. You've got to work on improving your writing abilities by being more descriptive, fully flesh this story out so that it isn't so linear and following only one path, and creating some build-up between events so it isn't happening all to fast. Try explaining the world we are in, and the characters themselves.

— FazzTheMan on 7/8/2015 1:50:55 AM with a score of 0

I can't believe I just died 2 times

— Captain boring pants on 6/16/2015 7:55:15 PM with a score of 0

it was short. But fun.

— derpybacon on 5/17/2015 12:14:22 PM with a score of 0

eh..........
random 8/8!

— jaystarthecat on 4/28/2015 10:03:50 PM with a score of 0

Protip: don't give up to win

— Dmanxbox13 on 4/18/2015 7:35:41 PM with a score of 0

best story ever

— hqwkejdhwekqrweqkj on 2/19/2015 7:02:39 PM with a score of 0

I LOVE LUIGI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

— pokelover59 on 1/27/2015 9:31:09 PM with a score of 0

This game is incredibly simple and is very linear.

— Madbrad200 on 6/19/2014 12:39:24 PM with a score of 0

short, but fun.

— David on 4/13/2014 9:57:37 PM with a score of 0

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Luigi's Adventure

Player Rating2.94/8

Story Difficulty2/8

Play Length1/8

Maturity Level1/8

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