One Punch Man X Dragon Ball Z

Ass wasn't that long.

Pfft. This is absolute rubbish. There's no way Vegeta could survive Saitama's serious punch.

This... Is not very good. Please learn how to use English dialogue and grammar. Also, expand this story! Make it unique somehow--it's like almost every other story with a crappy battle scene. I think that the story could definitely be good, but with this bad demo, I can't tell for sure.

Clearly, the author didn't put effort into it other than maybe the variables.

No.
No demos.
No script-like dialogue.
Please.

You misspelled "Continue" as "Contuine."

Please don't make demos, they're annoying.

Don't post demos, thanks. Especially not bad ones.

Mizal: Also, I'm not sure why it is, but I'm noticing a trend of people not understanding how dialogue works.

Don't insult Dragonball Z like this.