The Black Butler

Uhhhh...I understand the basic plots of Kuroshitsuji, but this was quite confusing (that may just be me though). However, there were some aspects of the story that not even a seasoned fan might be able to know. For example, I had no idea who I was, who Luca was, or what I was even supposed to do. There wasn't a lot of description in the story, which could have helped build the plot better, and there was no background on the characters.

This story has a lot of potential to be a good one, but for now it's a matter of fleshing it out and building a world around it, even if it is a fanfiction.

Really linear and you can get caught in loop on the first few pages. Could be fixed with a simple limit on the amount of times you can click certain links really

I was mostly lost the entire time about what the hell is going on. And also about the world in general. Some background information would have helped draw me in.

Grammatical errors are aplenty, though I guess I should have expected that, looking at the rating the game has.

What I want to complain about most is the broken section halfway through the story where it just kept looping and I could keep screaming over and over as the two men discuss stuff close to me. May not be exact on the details, but I sure as hell won't be replaying this again to confirm. That finally broke whatever little immersion I had in the story. I guess it's not the worst thing I ever read, but there's plenty of room for improvement.

I was lost the entire time. There were lots of grammatic errors, the story wasn't explained or fleshed out very well, and the writing was bland. It also ends before anything interesting happens.

i dont know how to feel about replacing alois

I wish I could've played throughout the entire thing until the soul was taken!

For the most part I was confused, but I'm not sure if that's just me.

***Spoilers ahead***

Also, would have been nice to know the demon would take your soul before you asked him to grant your wish! o: But, with some refinement, there's definitely a decent story in there!

It's good but....make the next part.

I wanted more, it was cut too short, too soon.

SEQUELLLLL I NEED MOAR