The City is being attacked by Killer Monkeys!

There were a lot of locations and things to do, I wish there was a goal that was defined in the beginning the readers were supposed to work towards or attempt without having to make one up themselves as they went along. It's usually the core of any video game or CYOA: the goal. It makes everything feel more comfortable, less random, and less alien.

I liked the pictures, the humor and the story though.

It needs an easily identifiable plot, goal, characters, and an easier way of finishing the game (because I'm pretty sure there's only one way, and it takes a while). Besides that, it was unique, but also a bit childish, especially in the way you died. I mean, seriously, how do you die from monkeys laughing at you?

How do u die by buying a cat..

Is there even a way to win this? I used the net on every possible thing, and... nothing.

(am i missing something or)

It was a pretty decent storygame. Not bad, but needs more description. And, i would like more creativity in there. Keep it up!

lolsorandom story... cant you be a bit more creative? I LOVE IT!!!

Is it even possible to win this? And only one of the items was actually useful for me

bad bad bad stay far awau

Ok, let me tell u wat I think.

So first, it's mornin, right? Then you go somewhere from oak to main street. You go in the pet shop, and bam, u get killed :l

This was very random and not well done either. The description was lazy, and your math is evidently wrong.