Timewarp - Ancient times

That was definitely a very good Edutainment storygame. Though there are a few things I would recommend revising.

First, you called 32-year old Alexander (I think it was him) a "young man". Our definitions of "young man" are very different. Also, the information was just so dense and clunky. After a while, I ended up skimming/skipping the information. While I do want to know, it's a bit... too informing. There's no way I would remember anything, and I doubt many people would bother to actually read through all of that information on every single page.

Other than that, I think that the storygame was well worth my time and energy to read. I definitely learned SOMETHING, and the "story" of it all was well put together. Good job!

I had a Saved Game for this story from 8 years ago and finally got around to finishing it today. It's a little too easy to lose, as you have to start over for just one wrong answer, and the questions are pretty hard. The writing was enjoyable and characters memorable, though. I also enjoyed the historical facts and educational value of this game.

It is refreshing to straighten knowledge that has been switched around in my head. This was a cool experience!

Interesting game, just hope there are more choices available after meeting Chronos.

Well I'm doomed in ancient China.

This was an enjoyable quiz, 5/8.

Wow
. That was awesome! Pretty much impossible without going back, knowing a lot of history, or just looking it up, but really good nonetheless. Grammar was excellent, the storyline was interesting, and it all made sense and fitted together nicely. 8/8

it sucks and its way too long

horrible

Nice.

its okay